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Mon Jun 20, 2016, 11:16 AM

Sheepshank (12,504 posts)

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courts must have reason
elections direct our lives
Trump impotency

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66 replies	Author	Time	Post
Haiku for this last day of DU's primary debate [View all]	Shemp Howard	Jun 2016	OP
Here is one	awake	Jun 2016	#1
Let's see...	flor-de-jasmim	Jun 2016	#2
How about, to honor your namesake: "I'll gouge your eyes out!"	randome	Jun 2016	#3
Moe said that, not Shemp!	Shemp Howard	Jun 2016	#6
Damn! Got me on a technicality!	randome	Jun 2016	#11
Moe was, by every account, a very nice fellow!	Cooley Hurd	Jun 2016	#14
Ok, I will try:	Evergreen Emerald	Jun 2016	#4
Winner!	mcar	Jun 2016	#5
Okay.	LWolf	Jun 2016	#7
+ Eighty gazillion	Scuba	Jun 2016	#12
^^^^^^^^^^THIS^^^^^^^^^^	Miles Archer	Jun 2016	#15
+10,000 nt	Live and Learn	Jun 2016	#22
^^^^ WINNER ^^^^^	MrMickeysMom	Jun 2016	#27
Congrats!!! Excellent!	Silver_Witch	Jun 2016	#28
Nice!!	jillan	Jun 2016	#42
Very good. nm	rhett o rick	Jun 2016	#55
This was never a debate. The "facts" were never facts.	upaloopa	Jun 2016	#8
I'm no expert, but that's not haiku.	Shemp Howard	Jun 2016	#9
This message was self-deleted by its author	nolabear	Jun 2016	#13
LOL That is just what I was going to say. Not the least bit poetic. nt	Live and Learn	Jun 2016	#23
Everything you wrote	Whimsey	Jun 2016	#21
I guess you didn't read the OP...	MrMickeysMom	Jun 2016	#29
Typical Hillary supporter - breaking the rules...	Silver_Witch	Jun 2016	#31
The facts were never the facts?	pinebox	Jun 2016	#46
George Orwell would love your post. War is Peace reflects the ultimate denial. nm	rhett o rick	Jun 2016	#56
Haiku-	Bluenorthwest	Jun 2016	#65
Gibran-esque wisdom: "The joy of winning requires using FEAR in running."	HereSince1628	Jun 2016	#10
Here's a koan about division	Fozzledick	Jun 2016	#16
Here is mine:	Vattel	Jun 2016	#17
+10,000 nt	Live and Learn	Jun 2016	#24
This message was self-deleted by its author	Sheepshank	Jun 2016	#62
Ok, try this one out	Tarc	Jun 2016	#18
Sorry, you broke the rules.	Shemp Howard	Jun 2016	#19
For you:	Live and Learn	Jun 2016	#39
You are so cute that I decided to do another	Tarc	Jun 2016	#45
*	Donkees	Jun 2016	#20
Here is mine:	Live and Learn	Jun 2016	#25
DNC	Live and Learn	Jun 2016	#26
Damn!	MrMickeysMom	Jun 2016	#30
Love yours too. nt	Live and Learn	Jun 2016	#35
Not a Haiku, but here is my submission	HarmonyRockets	Jun 2016	#32
You are right, not haiku. nt	Live and Learn	Jun 2016	#36
Uprising:	k8conant	Jun 2016	#33
Love it. nt	Live and Learn	Jun 2016	#38
Good idea. Mine:	YouDig	Jun 2016	#34
Hmm.	ismnotwasm	Jun 2016	#37
Nice, ism. nt	brer cat	Jun 2016	#52
mine	xloadiex	Jun 2016	#40
I have a better one	laserhaas	Jun 2016	#41
Here's mine	jillan	Jun 2016	#43
That's not in traditional form, but I like it anyway!	Shemp Howard	Jun 2016	#44
Here's mine	pinebox	Jun 2016	#47
Oh pinebox	Tarc	Jun 2016	#48
My give a flying fuck flew	pinebox	Jun 2016	#49
I has a sad	Tarc	Jun 2016	#50
Corruption wins	pinebox	Jun 2016	#51
Did corruption win?	LWolf	Jun 2016	#53
Um	laserhaas	Jun 2016	#58
Dream on.	mia	Jun 2016	#54
I'll give it a go.	rhett o rick	Jun 2016	#59
flowers	mia	Jun 2016	#66
...	SidDithers	Jun 2016	#57
...	betsuni	Jun 2016	#60
This one's my favorite	PeaceNikki	Jun 2016	#64
5-7-5, moment of insight.	Hortensis	Jun 2016	#61
One try	Sheepshank	Jun 2016	#63

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