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Edited on Sun Apr-18-04 11:10 PM by markses
You would end with the strong points, but you'd wanna give it some flash with figuration. The point is to rev up the listeners, and figures of repetition tend to work really well here. So, you might try anaphora or, the repetition of the same word or phrase at the beginning of each clause. (Famous, of course: "We shall go on to the end, we shall fight in France, we shall fight on the seas and oceans, we shall fight with growing confidence and growing strength in the air, we shall defend our Island, whatever the cost may be, we shall fight on the beaches, we shall fight on the landing grounds, we shall fight in the fields and in the streets, we shall fight in the hills; we shall never surrender...Notice that Churchill's example also does a nice job of switching up the verb in the final clause - it builds to the most important point, another rhetorical technique you might use here).
So, you might bill the final paragraph as a summary that begins each clause with "Bush has failed..." if that is the theme of your speech; then arrange the ways he has failed in an orderly fashion.
And so we see the sad catalogue of failure. Bush has failed our children and teenagers with his disastrous education policies. Bush has failed our college students; he has failed our young people. Bush has failed our soldiers, our sailors, our Marines and our air force. Bush has failed our police and firefighters. Bush has failed our new families. Bush has failed our young workers. Bush has failed our middle class. Bush has failed our parents and our seniors, substituting shimmering pablum and double entry bookkeeping for solid policy and responsible healthcare. Bush has failed our cities, our once vibrant and towering cityscapes. Bush has failed our towns, our farms, our factories and our countryside. Bush has failed our mighty forests, from sea to shining sea, pumping poison into the air. Bush has failed us in every arena of life, and - with his ill-conceived foreign adventures - Bush has even failed and dishonored our dead.
But because Bush has failed us so mightily, we must succeed. We must succeed laying bare Bush's failures. We must succeed in developing responsible policy. We must succeed in repairing our alliances and rebuilding our global stature. We must succeed in caring for our kids, in caring for our seniors, in caring for our men and women in uniform, in caring for our land, our air, our water, our cities, our towns, our farms. We must succeed. Bush has always had the luxury of failure, and so he thinks that everyone has such luxuries. I do not have this luxury; We do not have this luxury; America does not have this luxury; the world does not have this luxury. No. Not the warm and pampered luxury of failure, but the cold and determined necessity of success. Bush can fail, and Bush has failed - but we - we - must succeed."
etc. You get the idea.
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