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First off, nice job. It's always good to see things spelled out like this. Now, I recognize that I'm one of the more conservative members of this board, so you may take my critique or not as you wish.
My first complaint is the rather general nature of your points. I'm one who always thinks that the devil is in the details. Having a broad overall philosophy that a program fits into is nice, but it's usually an optional extra. It's the program itself, how it's structured and run, that determines its effectiveness. It would be nice to tie each of your 10 points to some specific program - either something new, or something existing that can be improved, reformed, or disbanded. On the other hand, that may make it too long to be catchy.
1. You analogy fails for me here. In auto accidents, the drivers have a measure of control. This makes a huge difference in how we react to the situations - it's why people fear flying more than driving, despite the well knows statistics that flying is safer than driving. A situation where we have no control is considered worse than one where we do, regardless of how deadly the two situations are. I suppose you could say that, since it's still deadly, this is an example of "ignoring reality," but I can respond that failing to recognize that difference is an example of the same on your own part.
Further, the attack on the War on Terror at the end feels tacked on. Nothing leads up to it - save that the same 'denial of reality' argument is frequently used against the Bush administration. Even accepting that, the argument fails. Personally, I'd like to think we could handle both auto safety standards and a war at the same time. I think you'll need to make this argument more explicit.
2. This is a nice, general point. You can hardly argue with it. But it accomplishes nothing without an example - it's as true for the right as the left - one solution might solve multiple problems. Then again, it might not. Or it might cause still other problems. Wishful thinking is not policy. I think you need an example here - give a program that will solve two or more of the listed problems.
3. This is an excellent point to play on. Health care is a growing problem, as you point out. However, it's also a fairly complicated one. A simple call for universal coverage glosses over one of the prime difficulties. Right now, our generally private coverage is covering the costs of health care development for the world - the U.S. is where companies make their profits. If we cut that out, development will drop off. On the other hand, I think we're getting a bit tired of subsidizing the rest of the world. I don't have a great solution myself. I think recognizing this complexity can add to this point, along with a call to look for new solutions. Or maybe not - that's a bit wishy-washy for a manifesto...
4. I'd include nuclear in with your call for renewable energy. It's a proven technology, and generates energy very cheaply. However, one reason our infrastructure has grown fragile is the inability to build new processing plants and refineries. Would you support such growth? That does seem the trade off you're asking for.
5. Here's one where I'll pretty much disagree. Public transport makes great sense in cities. We could even make better use of it throughout the north east corridor. But in most areas of the country, it simply makes no sense.
6. This call will go over like a lead balloon unless you also recognize the great failures of our public schools, especially in inner cities (but sadly spreading well beyond that.) We need a way to improve existing schools, before trying to expand public education beyond its existing grade limits. The current leading mechanism is 'school choice.' Do you have another suggestion?
7. This needs specifics. I don't even have anything else to say - it's just too vague.
8. OK, here you're saying we need to remove religious intolerance. But, you'd better believe the way we say religion works.
Well, it's a message.
I'd be just as happy to keep things as we have them here. Government should not take sides with regards to religion. Individuals should feel free to practice their faith as they see fit, insofar as that practice does not cause harm to other people or otherwise break existing laws. End it there.
Some religions preach intolerance for those of other religions. Again, the state should not interfere with that, save to enforce anti-discrimination laws. I'm not even really in favor of private action to reform those religions, although proselytizing is just fine (in other words, try to convert the people to your view, rather than the religion.)
9. This needs more detail, or at least rewriting. Right now, it sounds suspiciously like 'we need to dissolve the people and form a new one.'
10. Again, a simple banality. Also, the Gordian knot is a terrible metaphor here - we all know, after all, that it was cut.
I don't know if this will help, or if you'll even agree with any of my points, but this is offered constructively. Enjoy.
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