I wanted to post this in a new thread. I was looking at past FEMA press release related to a thread on Jeb Bush's comments about not blaming FEMA for poor response.
I found some FEMA press releases from Hurricane Frances, the second hurricane to hit Florida last year. I was comparing the release last year to press releases about Katrina and discover that FEMA at some point (and I'm not saying it was recently but I'd be curious to know when) changed the disclosure message about who they were that was attached to the bottom of their Press releases.
Here is the disclosure message at the bottom of the releases from last year (9/4/2004):
On March 1, 2003, FEMA became part of the U.S. Department of Homeland Security. FEMA’s continuing mission within the new department is to lead the effort to prepare the nation for all hazards and effectively manage federal response and recovery efforts following any national incident. FEMA also initiates proactive mitigation activities, trains first responders, and manages the National Flood Insurance Program and the U.S. Fire Administration.
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Here is the newly worded disclosure on a Press Release from 9/3/2005:
FEMA prepares the nation for all hazards and manages federal response and recovery efforts following any national incident. FEMA also initiates mitigation activities, trains first responders, works with state and local emergency managers, and manages the National Flood Insurance Program and the U.S. Fire Administration. FEMA became part of the U.S. Department of Homeland Security on March 1, 2003.
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http://www.fema.gov/news/newsrelease.fema?id=18626>Notice the changes: From leading the effort to prepare the nation to just preparing the nation. From effectively managing federal response to just managing it. From initiating proactive mitigation activities to just initiating mitigation activities.
This puts in my mind the frame of reference of a resume. When you create one, you are advised to put in language that conveys a sense of action and initiative. Words like lead, proactive and effective are good in a resume.
I find it troubling that someone took the time in the last year to revise this statement and take these out. It is akin to dumbing down your resume because you don't feel you can handle or want to handle the job which you might get.
Any thoughts?