soleft
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Mon Sep-22-03 09:52 PM
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I want so share a poem my son wrote |
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He has this project to collect short stories and poems reflecting different points of view about the war in the Middle East. The collection included courtesy of the Red, White and Blue by Toby Keith
This is one my son wrote
My Father
My father was a good man He would always help me He would always help others I don't know why he died A lot of other people died on that day too None of those people did anything wrong He was just trying to help other people get out of the building Then it fell I don't know why Why? Why did the Americans kill him?
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Mon Sep-22-03 09:54 PM
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1. Is it autobiographical, SOleft? |
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Edited on Mon Sep-22-03 09:57 PM by BurtWorm
Or did he imagine it?
PS: It's a heartbreaker in either case.
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soleft
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Mon Sep-22-03 10:06 PM
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5. Not autobiographical, and not LIHOP either |
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aahhhhhhhhhh. Got me too.
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Rowdyboy
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Tue Sep-23-03 12:51 AM
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6. Kids see thing in the proper perspective... |
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Mon Sep-22-03 09:56 PM
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that i like his poem very much :hi:
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Mon Sep-22-03 09:56 PM
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3. Straight from the heart. |
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Edited on Mon Sep-22-03 09:57 PM by Prisoner_Number_Six
You can't ask for anything more.
I wish such a poem had not been necessary to create, but it's far from a perfect world.
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Mon Sep-22-03 10:04 PM
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and too much harsh reality for a young kid to be questioning. I really like the poem, because it's simplicity and plain-speaking cut right to the heart. Sometimes you get tired of all the flowery speeches from adults about nothing.
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Tue Sep-23-03 06:02 PM
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7. Touching sentiments... |
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What a pity that Vengeance is blinder than Justice ever was...
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proud patriot
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Tue Sep-23-03 06:05 PM
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Good for him to help people walk in another childs shoes .
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Tue Sep-23-03 06:07 PM
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...I love how you think you know what it's about, and then... Great way to make people think. Your son is damn cool.
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