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RandomKoolzip Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Dec-14-04 01:01 AM
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This is the best poem about America I've ever read:
Edited on Tue Dec-14-04 01:04 AM by RandomKoolzip
FLORIDA 41503

driving six hours
along this length
of hard-packed shit
and sand

it is impossible
to not have yr head
fill with visions
of utter carnage

every tree
seems to hold
a cadaver, swinging
from its branches

organ meat
dropping from the sky
on everyone
passing underneath

every mile
of sun-soaked crap
seems colder than
a penguin's black ass

the warmth here
is not human
is not a comforting blanket
is not a lover's embrace

the warmth here
is the last breath of life
is the biochemistry of rot
is the falseness of an enemy's smile

have hearts ever worked in this place?
have they ever collided to make something beautiful?
have they ever done anything except pop in disgust?
i think not

i mean
my heart has worked here
on occasion
but never for anything of this place

even as i watched my father die here
my tears were not of florida
they flowed for versions of my father
that had existed elsewhere

when he came here he was already dead
in so many ways
and one cannot mourn a spirit
that departs from here

it would be bullshit
because anywhere is better
hell is better
and heaven couldn't be any worse

but i am here
and i am alive
because i live in the minds
of those who know me

and not one of those motherfuckers
is here
which's probably
all for the best

Byron Coley, 2004
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mitchum Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Dec-14-04 01:27 AM
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1. Nice, but just about anything by Coley is going to be good
I've been reading the guy for almost 20 years, but never knew what he looked like until a recent viewing of the Jandek movie.
Thanks. I never have read this.
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RandomKoolzip Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Dec-14-04 02:20 AM
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4. Yup, I was obsessed with FE all through high school....
Got hooked on his Spin "Underground" column at 13 and then tried to find out everything I could about the guy, who was pretty slippery. I could never imagine what he looked like, either.....

"1/2 Japanese: The Band Who Would Be King" has a few interviews with Coley in as well. That's the first glimpse of The Man I ever got (1993).

Did you know that Jandek actually played a live show in Glasgow in October? (!!!!!!!)
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enigmatic Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Dec-14-04 09:47 AM
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7. Jandek played a concert???
Edited on Tue Dec-14-04 10:28 AM by enigmatic
I've got most of his stuff from the 90's and have played him on my show; haven't seen the movie yet, though...
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RandomKoolzip Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Dec-14-04 10:20 AM
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9. Yeah, I know!
Jandek played a special surprise concert at a free music festival in Glasgow in October. Of course, he was unbilled and unannounced. I think it was Richard Youngs who arranged it.

There's a big picture section on Seth Tisue's website about it.
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enigmatic Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Dec-14-04 10:28 AM
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10. That's a great site...
Haven't been there in ages though; I'll have to check it out. Jandek's stuff is hard on the ears for the most part, but I look at him as something akin to Ornette Coleman in the way he plays inbetween the notes, if that makes any sense..

Funny thing too; I used to be in a band w/ a guy who looked just like Jandek (or the blond-haired guy that people say "is" Jandek) a long time ago; he wasn't from Houston, but man, he could be his twin...
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RandomKoolzip Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Dec-14-04 10:32 AM
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11. Sterling Smith?
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enigmatic Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Dec-14-04 10:38 AM
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12. That's him!
I mean, that's the guy the guy I knew looked like. I lost touch w/ him long before I ever heard of Jandek, but man, they look alike. I wish i still had a band pic to post..
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mitchum Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Dec-14-04 08:36 PM
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13. Jandek is becoming a media whore!
:) You just know there are some people who really do think that
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kodi Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Dec-14-04 01:50 AM
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2. then you are unfamilar with Langston Hughes
Let America be America again.
Let it be the dream it used to be.
Let it be the pioneer on the plain
Seeking a home where he himself is free.

(America never was America to me.)

Let America be the dream the dreamers dreamed--
Let it be that great strong land of love
Where never kings connive nor tyrants scheme
That any man be crushed by one above.

(It never was America to me.)

O, let my land be a land where Liberty
Is crowned with no false patriotic wreath,
But opportunity is real, and life is free,
Equality is in the air we breathe.

(There's never been equality for me,
Nor freedom in this "homeland of the free.")

Say, who are you that mumbles in the dark?
And who are you that draws your veil across the stars?

I am the poor white, fooled and pushed apart,
I am the Negro bearing slavery's scars.
I am the red man driven from the land,
I am the immigrant clutching the hope I seek--
And finding only the same old stupid plan
Of dog eat dog, of mighty crush the weak.

I am the young man, full of strength and hope,
Tangled in that ancient endless chain
Of profit, power, gain, of grab the land!
Of grab the gold! Of grab the ways of satisfying need!
Of work the men! Of take the pay!
Of owning everything for one's own greed!

I am the farmer, bondsman to the soil.
I am the worker sold to the machine.
I am the Negro, servant to you all.
I am the people, humble, hungry, mean--
Hungry yet today despite the dream.
Beaten yet today--O, Pioneers!
I am the man who never got ahead,
The poorest worker bartered through the years.

Yet I'm the one who dreamt our basic dream
In the Old World while still a serf of kings,
Who dreamt a dream so strong, so brave, so true,
That even yet its mighty daring sings
In every brick and stone, in every furrow turned
That's made America the land it has become.
O, I'm the man who sailed those early seas
In search of what I meant to be my home--
For I'm the one who left dark Ireland's shore,
And Poland's plain, and England's grassy lea,
And torn from Black Africa's strand I came
To build a "homeland of the free."

The free?

Who said the free? Not me?
Surely not me? The millions on relief today?
The millions shot down when we strike?
The millions who have nothing for our pay?
For all the dreams we've dreamed
And all the songs we've sung
And all the hopes we've held
And all the flags we've hung,
The millions who have nothing for our pay--
Except the dream that's almost dead today.

O, let America be America again--
The land that never has been yet--
And yet must be--the land where every man is free.
The land that's mine--the poor man's, Indian's, Negro's, ME--
Who made America,
Whose sweat and blood, whose faith and pain,
Whose hand at the foundry, whose plow in the rain,
Must bring back our mighty dream again.

Sure, call me any ugly name you choose--
The steel of freedom does not stain.
From those who live like leeches on the people's lives,
We must take back our land again,
America!

O, yes,
I say it plain,
America never was America to me,
And yet I swear this oath--
America will be!

Out of the rack and ruin of our gangster death,
The rape and rot of graft, and stealth, and lies,
We, the people, must redeem
The land, the mines, the plants, the rivers.
The mountains and the endless plain--
All, all the stretch of these great green states--
And make America again!
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CanuckAmok Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Dec-14-04 01:57 AM
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3. Bart Simpson's poem about America trumps all. It has everything:
"Hey America, you're so fine,
You're so fine you blow my mind,
America,
America."
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ChavezSpeakstheTruth Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Dec-14-04 08:07 AM
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5. I'll have to admit - that mirrors alot about how I feel of Florida
The last time I was there was at my Grandfathers funeral. The only suit I owned was a thick wool suit and it was 85 degrees and I was a pallbearer - death don't have no mercy in that land
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RandomKoolzip Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Dec-14-04 09:44 AM
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6. Me too. Whenever I've stayed with my mother there, it was always so...
depressing, but with such lovely surface ornamentation.
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ChavezSpeakstheTruth Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Dec-14-04 09:53 AM
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8. and stilfling heat
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amazona Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Dec-14-04 08:57 PM
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14. i guess i'm more a Gary Snyder type
Edited on Tue Dec-14-04 09:01 PM by amazona
Have to admit I've had no problem driving 6 hours through FLorida without having my head filled with images of utter carnage, c'mon, this dude must be hell on a road trip! :-)

On Edit --
For All by Gary Snyder

Ah to be alive
on a mid-September morn
fording a stream
barefoot, pants rolled up,
holding boots, pack on,
sunshine, ice in the shallows,
northern rockies.

Rustle and shimmer of icy creek waters
stones turn underfoot, small and hard as toes
cold nose dripping
singing inside
creek music, heart music,
smell of sun on gravel.

I pledge allegiance

I pledge allegiance to the soil
of Turtle Island,
and to the beings who thereon dwell
one ecosystem
in diversity
under the sun
With joyful interpenetration for all.
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