johnnie
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Sun Jun-12-05 09:31 PM
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Just a quick poem...kind of |
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Have you ever had someone on your mind? And you know that the chances are, that they aren’t thinking about you. A percentage of your mind thinks that things might work out, But reality tells you that it’s not the truth.
A part of your soul wishes words can be spread And a thought can be packaged, delivered You know for yourself that you’re left on your own Without help, she won’t hear a word.
Alone again, and the past never ends You think that she might hear my voice Hope has been lost, because the price is the cost Once again I haven’t a choice.
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Sun Jun-12-05 09:36 PM
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If you like to read and write poetry we have a poetry group now. Things are moving kind of slow over there so we'd appreciate more people getting involved.
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Sun Jun-12-05 09:38 PM
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2. I just whipped that one out |
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Most of my stuff is lyrics. I'll look into it. Thanks Droopy!
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Sun Jun-12-05 09:42 PM
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:)
And, I know what you mean.
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Sun Jun-12-05 09:44 PM
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I have written a lot of stuff in my life, but this was just off the cuff. It is how I feel right now about someone, but it's not my best work. Just some thoughts.
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Sun Jun-12-05 09:49 PM
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5. Sometimes those are the best ones...the ones that speak from the heart |
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without agonizing over the exact content. I like your thoughts. I just hope maybe they aren't true in your case. Maybe she really does feel the same way? I hope so. :)
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Sun Jun-12-05 09:51 PM
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6. Did you go to New York? |
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If you did, I hope you had fun. Yeah, there actually is someone I am thinking of. i don't do it much, but I am today. Who knows? Maybe she is thinking the same.
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Sun Jun-12-05 09:53 PM
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7. I went to NY - it was a lot of fun. |
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I have some pictures, but I have to get everyone's name straight and permission to post their pictures before I start a thread. Thanks for asking.
We had a great time in Rudy's and then going out to dinner. Some of us went downtown afterward and went to a piano bar and then did a little shopping in the village. :D
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Sun Jun-12-05 10:25 PM
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but I guess intimate thoughts sometimes can be.
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Sun Jun-12-05 11:15 PM
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9. Very nice, johnnie...very... |
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Especially for off-the-cuff...I can identify with it as well, a little. I didn't know you did poetry. I'd love to see some more!
:hi:
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