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WilliamPitt Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 02:55 AM
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AAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!
The Story of Steve
By William Rivers Pitt
t r u t h o u t | Perspective

Tuesday 13 September 2005

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In cold blood he leapt into burning Etna.

- Horace

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Paging Oprah Winfrey. You're going to want to sit up and take notice of this one.

So there's this guy named Steve, who grew up in Lowell, Massachusetts. Steve is what you would describe as an average guy, works construction, went to a tech/voc high school, a townie with oak leaf clusters. A solid citizen. A good man.

A little back story, to set the Steve stage, to tell you about the kind of man he is. Steve loved this woman once upon a time, and dropped somewhere in the neighborhood of two grand on an emerald ring for her. As it turns out, the woman in question was barking-mad insane, and wound up stabbing him in the back - literally. Steve got the ring back after the relationship finished its little Hindenburg routine, and took it to a bridge.

He fully intended to toss the ring into the river under the bridge. He stood there with the emerald band in hand, composing his thoughts. Across the bridge came a very young woman with a couple of babies in tow. Steve could tell right away that she was not anywhere near the well-to-do neighborhood. Instead of giving the ring its symbolic drowning, he gave it to the lady with the babies. He told her how much it was worth, and told her to pawn it, told her in the best Steve Miller fashion to take the money and run. She flipped out completely, weeping with gratitude.

This is a Steve theme. Now you know what you need to know about the man.

Anyway, Steve fell in love with a woman from New Jersey named Linda. Linda at some point last year got fed up with Jersey and checked out to New Orleans. New city, new culture, new climate, new everything. Everything was cool, until Katrina showed up. Steve lost track of Linda, as did her family, as did the country, once her city got wiped off the map.

Steve sat and watched CNN like the rest of us, and called Linda repeatedly to no avail. He called her parents and asked if they had heard from her, and they hadn't, and were flipping out. Finally, two Sundays ago, he said enough was enough. He told his boss that he was heading to New Orleans to find her, and his boss cut him two paychecks to help him. He called Linda's father and said he was going to find her and bring her back if it killed him. He hopped a plane to the closest available spot, and poured himself into the worst, most dangerous place in America, to find the woman he loved.

Snapshots of Steve in the Big Easy:

He banged from one shelter to another, to another, doing a loop through the five of the biggest shelters over several days looking for Linda.

At some point, Steve got his hands on a flat-bottom boat and rowed around the city. He found dozens and dozens and dozens of people, and rowed them to shelters. He saved perhaps a couple hundred lives.

One day, he met Harry Connick Jr. at a shelter, and asked him if he had seen a pretty white girl named Linda.

One day, he met an Iraq veteran in a shelter who was just back, who was permanently in a wheelchair from shrapnel wounds, who was desperate to do what Steve was doing, who had lost his whole family to the storm.

One day, he pounded through a rooftop pull people out of their attic.

One day, he heard a baby crying in a house, and went in to find the baby on the floor in between two dead bodies, and took the baby to a shelter.

He turned almost yellow at one point from the foul water. He got a fungus on his feet from the water at one point. Doctors at the shelters he kept checking, and kept bringing people to, took care of him. He rowed, and searched, and saved, and looked for Linda. He didn't sleep.

And then, after days of searching, Steve found Linda.

She was in a shelter, and was well enough given the circumstances. She lost her mind when she saw him, Steve from Lowell in the midst of the worst place in America. She didn't want to leave when he said they were going. "It's martial law," she said. "They're pointing guns at people." To hell with that, Steve told her, and took her out. They rowed, and walked, and got on a bus to Baton Rouge.

He got her new clothes, got her a meal, and got her in touch with her parents. When Linda called her parents, her father asked to speak to Steve. "I don't know what to say," said Linda's dad. "I want you to come home. I want to shake your hand. I want to thank you." The next day, they got plane tickets home.

I hope Linda is smart enough to marry this man. I hope Steve didn't catch anything in that water. I hope everyone he helped rescue in his flat-bottom boat finds their own personal salvation as best they can. I hope the baby he rescued from between those bodies grows up to be a wise President of the United States.

Thanks to Steve, of Lowell, Massachusetts, I hope.
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khashka Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 02:58 AM
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1. We could use more men like Steve
A good man.

Khash.
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BikeWriter Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 03:01 AM
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2. Steve sounds like a good man.
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Kenneth ken Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 03:16 AM
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3. nice - are you taking corrections?
"One day, he pounded through a rooftop to pull people out of their attic."

"He turned almost yellow at one point from the foul water. He got a fungus on his feet from the water at oneanother / a different(?) point."
(It doesn't seem to me to have a good rhythm there or something.)

otherwise :applause:




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WilliamPitt Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 03:21 AM
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4. THANK YOU
The "at one point" thing is purposefull. Three repetitons in the paragraph. Nails the shards to the shed.

Thank you for the "TO pull people out" correction. MANY thanks.
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Kenneth ken Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 03:27 AM
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5. now I'm gonna sound picky
and I don't mean to. You don't actually have 3 'at one point' things in that paragraph.

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WilliamPitt Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 03:32 AM
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6. Duh. Right.
The repetition was on purpose regardless. Hammering a similar tone. Writing = speaking, which = music if you do it right. That's what I try to do.
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Kenneth ken Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 03:39 AM
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9. yeah, I kind of understand that
I did get the purposeful repetition in the One day. . . parts

But in the other, it just rang a wrong note in my brain I guess.

Anyway, I'm not meaning to criticise, just commenting. It was your writing that first brought me here, so I certainly admire it, and defer to your judgement on what you ultimately decide to post at TO.

:hi:



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WilliamPitt Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 03:48 AM
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10. Thank you so much.
:toast:

I owe you one.
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tavalon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Sep-15-05 04:41 PM
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32. Yeah
I've been reading Will's stuff for so long, I recognize many of his patterns and they are sublime, but every once in a while, it just doesn't flow for me. Sometimes I mention it and he changes it and sometimes I mention it and he doesn't change it. I'm cool either way because he is an imminently better writer than I am an editor (or writer, sadly. I'm too addicted to parentheses to be much good). I envy him because I have very similar things I want to broadcast to the world but he is just so much better at it than me.

OTOH, I am so grateful that there is someone out there getting my points out there in such a graceful, elegant and functional manner. It makes me heart feel easier.
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Tigress DEM Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Sep-14-05 12:48 AM
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29. Never mind the critics, Will, you make beautiful music!
Healing the soul is more important than perfect grammar. Some poetry is all about no caps, no rules, just flow.

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displacedtexan Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Sep-15-05 04:46 PM
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33. Your mastery of cadence is breathtaking.
Remember me? A couple of years ago, I complimented you on your Ciceronian style.
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chknltl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 03:33 AM
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7. An inspiration to all the "nice-guys" out there.
Bookmarked and nominated.
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MrScorpio Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 03:35 AM
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8. Steve is the man
See you again in a couple of weeks up in DC
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 09:50 AM
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11. Outstanding work, my dear Will.....
Nominated, and KICKED!


:kick: :kick: :kick: :kick:
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Fridays Child Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 11:05 AM
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12. I'm bookmarking this until...
...I don't know. Until I have the honor of shaking Steve's hand. Someday.
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deadparrot Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 11:07 AM
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13. Happy to give this a kick to the Greatest page.
:kick:
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auntAgonist Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 11:10 AM
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14. Steve is an amazing
man. I hope the world is good to him if and when he ever needs anything.
I hope Linda knows how precious he is.

thanks for sharing this story with us. It gives hope for humanity.

aA.
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mopinko Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 11:15 AM
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15. steve for president
remember when we had a president?
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rocktivity Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 11:22 AM
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16. Oprah? You're thinking too small, Will!
Edited on Tue Sep-13-05 11:28 AM by rocknation
I've already got the movie cast--with you screenwriting, of course!

On edit: Oh, she's a Jersey girl--that explains everything!

:headbang:
rocknation
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Peace Patriot Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 11:58 AM
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17. Yeah, I'm looking for a president, too. I've added Steve to my list.
First name on the list: William Rivers Pitt.

You have us hope, when all was lost. You set the tone, you had the words, you felt the fire, you helped to heal the broken heart of our democracy. You are a founding father of the Second American Revolution, with a spiritual lineage straight back to those geniuses and firebrands who said all men are created equal, and thus overturned 10,000 years of human thought. Not perfect men, no. But, by God, they started something. And it's up to us to finish it. That's what you did, Will. You gave me new faith that we could.

If the President is someone who embodies our nation, someone we can look up to, someone who helps form our best self-image, and inspires us, and speaks to our best selves and our highest goals, you are already President of the United States, or perhaps I should say, President of the United States of the Disenfranchised Majority. The true President. The President by moral right.

And so is Steve. You are the true representatives of the sovereignty and nobility of the people, at our best.
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Gregorian Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 12:07 PM
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18. Modern day knight in shining armor rescues damsel in distress.
Edited on Tue Sep-13-05 12:08 PM by Gregorian
We could use a little of this now and then.






























































god, my life is so fucking uninspired. I wish someone could rescue me.
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Stephanie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 12:53 PM
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20. You might be more inspired -
by rescuing somebody yourself.
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Midlodemocrat Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 12:24 PM
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19. Beautiful, Will, absolutely beautiful.
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MissMarple Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 02:03 PM
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21. Damn it, you made me cry.
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VelmaD Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 02:05 PM
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22. aaaaaAAAAAAAAaaaaa...AAAA!!!
aaaaaAAAAAAAAaaaaa...AAAA!!!

Come to the land of the ice and snow...

Sorry...had to be done. :)
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WilliamPitt Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 02:44 PM
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23. Link to the final
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redqueen Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 03:35 PM
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24. Thanks, Will.
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In_The_Wind Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Sep-15-05 05:26 PM
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34. Incredible story!
Amazing man.

:thumbsup:
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Jokinomx Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 08:37 PM
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25. A Wonderful Story of Courage and Perseverance......
Thanks for sharing this ... it really brightened my day. We ALL need to hear of people like this. It helps to offset all the terrible news that we have been hearing everyday.

:kick:
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Scout1071 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 09:00 PM
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26. Damn.
I saw the original thread today, but admit that I was multi-tasking with work and became distracted.

You got me this time Will. Thanks for sharing such a great story.
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Miss Chybil Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-13-05 10:01 PM
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27. What a wonderful story told wonderfully.
Thanks, Will. Thanks, Steve.
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Tigress DEM Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Sep-14-05 12:40 AM
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28. Real heros - driven by love.... cool.
I wish them the best and this has been one of the only posts I've read today that didn't depress the hell out of me. Thanks
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anarchy1999 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Sep-14-05 12:59 AM
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30. Thank you Will. Never in all my life did I ever imagine anything like
this, I'm so sorry.
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nicknameless Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Sep-14-05 03:53 AM
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31. This line?
... the woman in question was barking-mad insane, and wound up stabbing him in the back - literally.

Yikes ... You left that little detail out of your GD version.
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Missy Vixen Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Sep-15-05 05:37 PM
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35. I hope so, too
>I hope Linda is smart enough to marry this man.<

If she's not, I'll bet I have no problem marrying him off to someone wonderful as soon as humanly possible. If I wasn't already married (and he in love with Linda,) I'd be asking for his contact information!

I have never met Steve, but he has a beautiful soul.

Julie
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