I started a blog project

[BigMcLargehuge]

It's going to be an ongoing fiction piece. Let me know what you think of the first post.

http://henchmandiaries.blogspot.com/

[BigMcLargehuge]

1. kick for feedback

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[WCGreen]

2. I likeit....

But in order to realy grab attention....

Start with some action and then get back to the explaination....



"Now that I'm trapped here in this giant fucking spider web, maybe it wasn;t such a good idea to listen to Ms. X.....

You know, set up the action first......

Just my opinion.....

But otherwise, the writing is good....

[BigMcLargehuge]

3. final kick before this one dies too

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[BigMcLargehuge]

6. kick for the late night crew

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[nickgutierrez]

4. Bookmarked

I liked your ten rules. :thumbsup:

[BigMcLargehuge]

5. cool man!

I am going to try and update every day or two. it is part of a greater fiction project. I hope to sell a slew of short stories related to the blog.