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Sun Jan-15-06 02:41 PM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Sun 1/15/06) |
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Is/Not Love is not a profession genteel or otherwise
sex is not dentistry the slick filling of aches and cavities
you are not my doctor you are not my cure,
nobody has that power, you are merely a fellow/traveller
Give up this medical concern, buttoned, attentive,
permit yourself anger and permit me mine
which needs neither your approval nor your suprise
which does not need to be made legal which is not against a disease
but against you, which does not need to be understood
or washed or cauterized, which needs instead
to be said and said. Permit me the present tense.
Margaret Atwood
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RL
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Sun Jan-15-06 03:00 PM
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1. That's quite a controlled poem |
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for such a heated emotion.
:hi:
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Sun Jan-15-06 03:08 PM
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7. Yes, it seems like it's about to burst any moment... |
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Sun Jan-15-06 03:01 PM
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2. Now, that one I understand. |
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All too fuckin' well. :(
Thanks. It needed to be said.
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Sun Jan-15-06 03:03 PM
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Sun Jan-15-06 03:04 PM
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Someone is pushing my buttons - and not in a good way. Do ya have an extra hug to spare? :cry:
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Sun Jan-15-06 03:06 PM
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5. Got lots of those for you... |
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:hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug: :hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug: :hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug: :hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug: :hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug: :hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug: :hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug: :hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug: :hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug:
How's that?
More if you need them...
RL
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Sun Jan-15-06 03:07 PM
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Sun Jan-15-06 03:23 PM
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8. Yes, indeed, my dear RetroLounge..... |
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This is one very controlled poem......
Beautifully understated, too.....
Thank you for it, and for all of them.....
I know posting these helps you......
They also help us!
:loveya: :hug:
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Sun Jan-15-06 04:07 PM
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Sun Jan-15-06 03:27 PM
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9. You can definitely feel the control in those words |
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Thanks, RL, for another fine post. :hug:
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Sun Jan-15-06 03:29 PM
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10. I understand this poem |
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Edited on Sun Jan-15-06 03:33 PM by supernova
I am similar in many ways. The quieter I get; look out... :grr: :argh: :grr: :argh: :nuke: :nuke:
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Sun Jan-15-06 04:43 PM
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12. I appreciate Atwood more and more |
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as I get older. (she was required reading when I was in high school...I think she's best left for adulthood)
What a great one. Thanks for posting it. :hi:
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