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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-05-06 11:32 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Wed 4/5/06)
Poem To Line My Casket With, Ramona

Come practice your whorish gestures in the graveyard, Ramona.
Come sharpen your teeth on the tombstones.
Cough up the roots if you know what's good for you.
When coyotes are teaching their young to howl,
ghoulies rehearse the Courtship of Wrist-bones.
When you hear clawing at the square of styrofoam
serving as a window in the caretaker's shack,
then you must count each step going up to the mausoleum,
and my ghost will appear in the churchyard.
He'll kiss the back of your knee in the moonlight.
These are not promises, but eerie enough, regardless.
You must count out loud, Ramona, the steps,
because this is the time to watch what eats you.
I used to love the way the wind whistled through your teeth
when you drove the back roads, above your legal limit.
I used to have these poses. They turned into habits.
I used to love the folks that loved me.
And they've been sad ones, my years since being dead.
And they've been coming, the folks who claim to love me.
And I hardly recognize myself. There aren't mirrors, as such.
The drum section rattles it out, down by the high school.
I hear them, or is it the caretaker drunk in his wheelbarrow?
You used to play the wheelbarrow, I recall.
You used to wash your underwear in the sink.
Above ground, the wind whistles through the tombstones.
Below ground, the wind sleeps and has colors.
Below ground, colors are how I dream of making my comeback.
There's a difference between a white dress and the white dress.
You used to strip off the white dress in a highly professional manner.
You used to dangle the remote, and I'd come get it.
You used to skip church. You used to skip dinner parties.
Now you've been seen hoisting condoms from the pharmacy.
There are twelve condoms to a pack. A pack of lovers mills outside your door.
A pack of the dead are heading toward the showers.
A pack of dead lovers is referred to as "a creep" of dead lovers.
More than one dead lover is weeping. But oh, how it was me who loved you then.
You with your cracked lips, with your love and your other defilements kept alive in a bucket.
When I first died, I stole a lock of your hair while you slept.
Now I dip it in ink when the mood strikes,
and the times you visit and kneel so pretty on the grass above me,
that's not scratching you hear. It's writing.

Josh Bell

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http://www.zoopress.org/poetry/bell.html

Josh Bell was born in Terre Haute, Indiana, and received his B.A. from Indiana State University, his M.A. from Southern Illinois University-Carbondale, and his M.F.A. from the Iowa Writers' Workshop, where he was a Teaching-Writing Fellow and Paul Engle Fellow. He is currently the Diane Middlebrook Fellow at the University of Wisconsin, and in the Fall of 2004 will be a Ph.D candidate at the University of Cincinnati. His poems have appeared in such magazines as Boston Review, The Colorado Review, Fence, Hotel Amerika, Verse, and Volt.



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RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-05-06 11:48 AM
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1. Wow
Just ... wow.

:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-05-06 12:43 PM
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4. The whole book is pretty amazing...
I picked it up on a suggestion from a worker at a bookstore and have NOT been disappointed...

:hi:

RL
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nothingshocksmeanymore Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-05-06 12:05 PM
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2. interesting...vivid
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xchrom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-05-06 12:30 PM
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3. ok -- you're going to find this odd.
but i find this an intersting mix between under milkwood and spoonriver anthology.

obviously post-post modern -- but all the dead come to life stuff is wonderful -- and he has that very casual way of talking that makes it so familiar.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-05-06 02:54 PM
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5. Yes, I love the almost conversational language
:hi:

RL
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-05-06 08:17 PM
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6. Evening Kick
:kick:

RL
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yvr girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-05-06 08:18 PM
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7. kick yourself
:hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-05-06 08:23 PM
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8. Hey you!
Wassup?

:hi:

RL
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yvr girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-05-06 08:40 PM
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9. I'm sure your stories are more interesting than mine
Pretty sure.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-05-06 08:43 PM
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10. Yeah, I had a totally interesting night
Made pizza for the kids, watched Nemo with them, and we are going to the airport in a few minutes to pick up there mom.

:yawn:

RL
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yvr girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-05-06 08:46 PM
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11. Well Nemo is a GREAT movie
I'm sure the evening will get more interesting.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-05-06 08:48 PM
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12. Interesting yes
but not necessarily better...

RL
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yvr girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-05-06 08:50 PM
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13. This could be true
Never the less, I can't wait to hear the story. Any pizza left over? I'm starving.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-05-06 08:51 PM
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14. Ate it all...
Will fill you in when I know more.

RL
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yvr girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-05-06 08:54 PM
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15. Some friend you are
not leaving me ANY pizza. *sigh*

:hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-05-06 09:01 PM
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16. I'll deliver one to you
one of these days...

:hug:

RL
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