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Tom Yossarian Joad Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-17-06 12:22 AM
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She left me here
among the bricks

giving myself to the sand.


Back in Carolina.

Back in Carolina...

I remember.

Swimming in the creek.

Cutting vines to swing on.

Playing Tarzan with my friends.



I remember.

Before the air rushed out
and the blinding heat
as the screams from outside
reverberated through my being into silence
into peace.



I remember
putting baseball cards in my spokes.

before Dad got pissed off.
and put me in my place.





I remember this morning

telling me to make a people free
telling me they expected fairness


While they tried to kill us


because their life was bad.

The sand is eating me now.

I keep feeding it

and she drinks
as much as I can give her.

I came here for my one true love.

and she has left me here.




end.

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amitten Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-17-06 12:25 AM
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1. Are you trying to kill me with depression?
These poems!! :cry:
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Tom Yossarian Joad Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-17-06 12:27 AM
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2. I'm sorry. They only come out about every two weeks or so.
But when they come out, they gots to get outta me somehow.

:toast:

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amitten Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-17-06 12:28 AM
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4. Well, I can see why.
Empathy is an inconvenient thing, isn't it?
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bananas Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-17-06 02:58 AM
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8. You need to drink more
when you drink enough, you can't type.
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Tom Yossarian Joad Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-17-06 03:01 AM
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9. Cute.
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Tom Yossarian Joad Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-17-06 07:15 AM
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10. hello?
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Swamp Rat Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-17-06 12:28 AM
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3. I remember swinging from old cypress trees out by Bonne Carre Spillway
Edited on Mon Apr-17-06 12:29 AM by Swamp Rat
in da swamp. Half-naked teenagers dangling from ropes until swinging out to the farthest point, and then 'SPASH'! - you're in the bayou. Old muscle cars, Ozzy's voice cracking through car speakers, beer bottles everywhere... :D

edit: and crawfish, and alligator sausage po-boys. :9
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Tom Yossarian Joad Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-17-06 12:30 AM
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5. CSNY was playing while I swang on those vines.
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Swamp Rat Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-17-06 12:40 AM
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6. Them too!
and especially CCR.... I was literally "Born on the Bayou!" :D

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Tom Yossarian Joad Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-17-06 02:20 AM
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7. Shit.
Thanks. Now Fogarty's gonna be running around my head all night.
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