jeff30997
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Tue Apr-18-06 11:21 AM
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The CEO of Halliburton enters an important meeting: |
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-I have a great news to announce! Scientists have discovered a huge asteroid that will hit the earth and wipe out the vast majority of human beings!
Someone ask:
-But sir,why is it such a great news?
-We got the contract to build the underground shelters and the tunnels networks for the VIPs!!!
The CEO gets a standing ovation.
(I imagined that joke the other night):)
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Tue Apr-18-06 11:39 AM
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1. Come on guys! Give me some feedback! |
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Tue Apr-18-06 11:54 AM
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2. Its to close to the truth to be a joke. |
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But good anyways.:thumbsup:
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Tue Apr-18-06 11:57 AM
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It was a joke!
ha ha
I thought it was breaking news.
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Tue Apr-18-06 01:52 PM
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Those bastards are so greedy!They profit from peoples misery!:banghead:
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Tue Apr-18-06 01:56 PM
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7. Well I hate those scumbags so... |
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I imagined this joke as a very sarcastic way to share my opinion.You know that they're war profiteer aren't you?
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Tue Apr-18-06 12:02 PM
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4. This is terrible, this joke. |
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Which is the punchline?
This: "-We got the contract to build the underground shelters and the tunnels networks for the VIPs!!!"
Or this? "The CEO gets a standing ovation."
Neither one works, but I think the first one is the actual punchline, which makes the ovation remark wholly unnecessary - one doesn't continue to tell a joke after one get one's laugh (there can be small sub laughs in the buildup to the big one, but you don't follow up with a smaller one.)
And as for the first one, it lacks snap, brevity -- "punch," if you will.
I'm afraid your joke is a failure.
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Tue Apr-18-06 01:48 PM
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Edited on Tue Apr-18-06 01:48 PM by jeff30997
I'm devastated by your analysis of my joke!!!:P
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Tue Apr-18-06 02:08 PM
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8. Dude, I am NEVER telling you a joke! |
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Tue Apr-18-06 02:14 PM
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9. You should go to a comedy club with me sometime. |
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Tue Apr-18-06 05:15 PM
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10. asthmaticeog you're a sadistiv MOFO!!! |
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Tue Apr-18-06 07:55 PM
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11. Kick for the evening DUers. |
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