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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-26-06 07:03 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Wed 4/26/06)
Graveyard At Hurd's Gulch

His grave is strewn with litter again,
crumpled napkins, a plastic spoon, white
styrofoam cup tipped on its side, bright
half-moon of lipstick on the rim.
I want to scold her for the mess she's left,
the flattened grass and squashed grapes,
but I've seen her walking toward the trees,
her hollow body receding, her shadow
following behind. I'm the intruder,
come not to mourn a specific body
but to rest under a tree, my finger tracing
the rows of glowing marble,
the cloud-covered hips of the hills.
I always take the same spot,
next to the sunken stone that says MOTHER,
the carved dates with the little dash between them,
a brief, deep cut, like a metaphor for life.
Does she whisper, I wonder, to the one
she loves, or simply eat and sleep, content
for an hour above the bed of his bones?
I think she brings him oranges and secrets,
her day's torn and intricate lace.
I have no one on this hill to dine with.
I'm blessed. Everyone I love is still alive.
I know there is no God, no afterlife,
but there is this peace, the granite angel
with the moss-covered wings whose face
I have grown to love, her sad smile
like that sadness we feel after sex,
those few delirious hours when we needed nothing
but breath and flesh, after we've flown back
into ourselves, our imperfect heavy bodies,
just before that terrible hunger returns.



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Dorianne Laux was born in 1952 in Augusta, Maine and is of Irish, French and Algonquin Indian heritage. Between the ages of 18 and 30 she worked as a gas station manager, sanatorium cook, maid, and donut holer. A single mother, she took occasional classes and poetry workshops at the local junior college, writing poems during shift breaks. In 1983 she moved to Berkeley, California where she began writing in earnest. Supported by scholarships and grants, she returned to school when her daughter Tristem was 9, and was graduated with honors from Mills College in the Spring of 1988 with a B.A. Degree in English.

Laux's first book of poems, Awake, published by BOA Editions in 1990, was nominated for the San Francisco Bay Area Book Critics Award for Poetry. Her poetry has appeared in numerous American journals and anthologies. She has received poetry fellowships from the MacDowell Colony and the National Endowment for the Arts. What We Carry is her second book of poems.



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RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-26-06 07:10 AM
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1. those few delirious hours when we needed nothing
reminded me of a song (hope you don't mind if I post it):hi:

If I could make a wish
I think I’d pass
Can’t think of anything I need
No cigarettes, no sleep, no light, no sound
Nothing to eat, no books to read

Making love with you
Has left me peaceful, warm, and tired
What more could I ask
There’s nothing left to be desired
Peace came upon me and it leaves me weak
So sleep, silent angel, go to sleep

Sometimes, all I need is the air that I breathe
And to love you
All I need is the air that I breathe
Yes to love you
All I need is the air that I breathe

Peace came upon me and it leaves me weak
So sleep, silent angel, go to sleep

Sometimes, all I need is the air that I breathe
And to love you
All I need is the air that I breathe
Yes to love you
All I need is the air that I breathe

Sometimes, all I need is the air that I breathe
And to love you
All I need is the air that I breathe
Yes to love you
All I need is the air that I breathe
And to love you
All I need is the air that I breathe
Yes to love you
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-26-06 12:34 PM
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4. Have you hears the KD Lang version?
It is really good.

RL
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lizziegrace Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-26-06 07:18 AM
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2. Thanks RL
:hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-26-06 04:47 PM
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7. You are welcome
:hi:

RL
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-26-06 08:18 AM
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3. Wow
I'm beginning to develop quite a girl-crush on Dorianne Laux. :hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-26-06 12:34 PM
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5. Thanks for introducing me to her work...
:hug:

RL
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-26-06 12:35 PM
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6. Anytime
:hug:
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