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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jul-09-06 10:08 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Sun 7/9/06)
Why I Am Not A Good Kisser

Because I open my mouth too wide
Trying to take in the curtains behind us
And everything outside the window
Except the little black dog
Who does not like me
So at the last moment I shut my mouth.

Because Cipriano de Rore was not thinking
When he wrote his sacred and secular motets
Or there would be only one kind
And this affects my lips in terrible ways.

Because at the last minute I see a lemon
Sitting on a gravestone and that is a thing, a thing
That would appear impossible, and the kiss
Is already concluded in its entirety.

Because I learned everything about the beautiful
In a guide to the weather by Borin Van Loon, so
The nature of lenticular clouds and anticyclones
And several other things dovetail in my mind
& at once it strikes me what quality goes to form
A Good Kisser, especially at this moment, & which you
Possess so enormously--I mean when a man is capable
Of being in uncertainties, Mysteries & doubts without me
I am dreadfully afraid he will slip away
While my kiss is trying to think what to do.

Because I think you will try and read what is written
On my tongue and this causes me to interrupt with questions:
A red frock? Red stockings? And the rooster dead? Dead of what?

Because of that other woman inside me who knows
How the red skirt and red stockings came into my mouth
But persists with the annoying questions
Leading to her genuine ignorance.

Because just when our teeth are ready to hide
I become a quisling and forget the election results
And industrial secrets leading to the manufacture
Of woolen ice cream cones, changing the futures
Of ice worms everywhere.

Can it be that even the greatest Kisser ever arrived
At his goal without putting aside numerous objections--

Because every kiss is like throwing a pair of doll eyes
Into the air and trying to follow them with your own--

However it may be, O for a life of Kisses
Instead of painting volcanoes!

Even if my kiss is like a paintbrush made from hairs.
Even if my kiss is squawroot, which is a scaly herb
Of the broomrape family parasitic on oaks.
Even if a sailor went to sea in me
To see what he could see in me
And all that he could see in me
Was the bottom of the deep dark sea in me.
Even though I know nothing can be gained by running
Screaming into the night, into the night like a mouth,
Into the mouth like a velvet movie theatre
With planets painted on its ceiling
Where you will find me, your pod mate,
In some kind of beautiful trouble
Over moccasin stitch #3,
Which is required for my release.

Mary Ruefle

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(Thanks to miss_american_pie for sending me this poem...)

********************

RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jul-09-06 10:10 AM
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1. You're welcome
:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jul-09-06 10:11 AM
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2. You're taste is impecable, as usual
:hug:

RL
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jul-09-06 10:21 AM
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3. I bet that kiss lasted all day...
sure packed a lot into it....
:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jul-09-06 10:28 AM
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4. All-day kisses are the best...
:hi:

RL
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yvr girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jul-09-06 10:30 AM
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5. If you're that distracted
I don't think your heart is in it.

:*
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jul-09-06 10:32 AM
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6. My heart doesn't do the kissing
as long as my lips are engaged I do okay...

:9

RL
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yvr girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jul-09-06 10:34 AM
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7. I kiss better if my heart is involved too
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jul-09-06 10:40 AM
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8. Yes, that can be true...
but true lust can lead to some great kissing too.

:lust:

RL
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yvr girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jul-09-06 10:48 AM
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11. I'm far too pure for that...
But willing to be corrupted.
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lizziegrace Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jul-09-06 10:42 AM
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9. ...
Opening up to someone takes incredible courage. I don't have it.

:hug:

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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jul-09-06 10:43 AM
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10. Sure you do...
It's in there waiting to come out.

:hug:

RL
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lizziegrace Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jul-09-06 10:52 AM
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12. Perhaps
But it's way back on aisle 7 behind the huge assortment of insecurities...

:(

Have I told you yet today? Dayum!!
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jul-09-06 10:53 AM
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13. "Clean Up, Aisle 7"
:hug:

RL
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lizziegrace Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jul-09-06 10:55 AM
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14. Sale on used insecurities!
All sales final, all stock will be sold.

:hug:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jul-09-06 12:45 PM
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15. My dear RetroLounge!
Hm, how much I like this poem!

Kissing is something that I can hardly have enough of.......

So quickly done, and yet so profoundly intimate........

In fact, your poem inspired me to run off and write down my thoughts before they vanished......

Perhaps my raw thinking will be useful in the pieces I have yet to write.....

Thank you......:loveya:
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