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Sun Sep-17-06 01:32 AM
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Jealous of something I should not have, |
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Edited on Sun Sep-17-06 01:38 AM by Writer
a star just out of reach. I see it sparkle far away my conscious tries to teach - "You, my lady young and lithe, conflicted, twisted, jilted mind. See you not the star beneath? Reach for that, I do bequeath."
Reaching then, but stumbling still, a tear falls from my cheek. My teeth are clenched, my fists are sore from inhibitions weak. So many stars have passed me by, but fear prevents the feel. Perhaps one day, I will reach down that star my heart will heal.
-- Writer.
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Sun Sep-17-06 01:38 AM
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This is a lovely poem.........
You wrote it, right?
Your pain is palpable, sweetie.....
I know what it means to be jealous, and you describe it nicely....
Thank you for this..... :hug:
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Sun Sep-17-06 01:39 AM
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I did write it, thank you.
Yes, it discusses jealousy, but jealousy for one that you shouldn't consider.
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Sun Sep-17-06 01:44 AM
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I didn't know you wrote poetry......
Although, given your username, I shouldn't be surprised!
I'll look for more from you.........:hug:
And now I'm headed for bed.........g'night!
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Sun Sep-17-06 11:28 AM
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I would like to share these feelings with more of you.
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Sat Sep-23-06 02:52 PM
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that you and I have a lot in common, unfortunately. It ain't easy.
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