More bad poetry.....

[khashka]

We fashion the knives
That stab us in the back
Lovingly forged
Sharpened with
Obsessive devotion
And when we feel
The first cut
We're still surprised




Khash.

[lizziegrace]

1. Yep

We bring it on ourselves. :)

[CaliforniaPeggy]

2. My dear Khash!

Ouch! Very good, sweetie.......

But I'm not sure it's happened to me.......yet...

I had a good chat after you.....

And....have you recovered yet?

:hug:

[billyskank]

3. Hi khash!

:hug:

[miss_american_pie]

4. That

is not bad poetry.

:hug:

[Road Scholar]

5. Khash, not bad at all. Please don't be so neg

when referring to yourself please. After a while, you'll start to believe it.:headbang: :yourock: :yourock: :yourock: :yourock: :yourock: :yourock:

[crim son]

6. It has truth in it. I like it. n/t

[Xipe Totec]

7. Not bad

Pretty good, actually.

You want bad? Here:

Compass of my life,
love that was never meant to be.

Dark beacon defined by absence,
lightning rod of powerless rage.

Guide of my life,
and focus of frustrated fury.

Absence that defines me,
background that marks,
a place I never was.

[Haole Girl]

8. I like the poem khashka!

And, in reading it, I could tell it was from the heart.

Keep writing! :hi:

[wildhorses]

9. I should PM you the poem I wrote about knives...

now thats some bad poetry:P


yours however...is NOT bad, not bad at all:hi:

[wildhorses]

10. check your PM...

see what I mean;)

:hug:

[BarenakedLady]

11. Not bad at all

You are exactly spot on.