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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Nov-01-06 01:52 PM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Wed 11/1/06)
Peanut Butter

I am always hungry
& wanting to have
sex. This is a fact.
If you get right
down to it the new
unprocessed peanut
butter is no damn
good & you should
buy it in a jar as
always in the
largest supermarket
you know. And
I am an enemy
of change, as
you know. All
the things I
embrace as new
are in
fact old things,
re-released: swimming,
the sensation of
being dirty in
body & mind
summer as a
time to do
nothing and make
no money. Prayer
as a last re-
sort. Pleasure
as a means,
and then a
means again
with no ends
in sight. I am
absolutely in opposition
to all kinds of
goals. I have
no desire to know
where this, anything
is getting me.
When the water
boils I get
a cup of tea.
Accidentally I
read all the
works of Proust.
It was summer
I was there
so was he. I
write because
I would like
to be used for
years after
my death. Not
only my body
will be compost
but the thoughts
I left during
my life. During
my life I was
a woman with
hazel eyes. Out
the window
is a crooked
silo.
Parts of your
body I think
of as stripes
which I have
learned to
love along. We
swim naked
in ponds &
I write be-
hind your
back. My thoughts
about you are
not exactly
forbidden, but
exalted because
they are useless,
not intended
to get you
because I have
you & you love
me. It's more
like a playground
where I play
with my reflection
of you until
you come back
and into the
real you I
get to sink
my teeth. With
you I know how
to relax. &
so I work
behind your
back. Which
is really
lovely. Nature
is out of control
you tell me &
that's what's so
good about
it. I'm immoderately
in love with you,
knocked out by
all your new
white hair

why shouldn't
something that
I have always
known be the
very best there
is. I love
you from my
childhood,
starting back
there when
one day was
just like the
rest, random
growth and
breezes, constant
love, a sand-
wich in the
middle of
day,
a tiny step
of light
in the vastly
conventional
path of
the Sun. I
squint. I
wink. I
take the
ride.

Eileen Myles

*******************

RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Nov-01-06 01:57 PM
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1. My dear Retro!
Wow, what a marvelous stream of consciousness poem this is!

I hardly knew what to make of it, so I just let it carry me along...

I kept wondering where it would actually go!

Thank you........:hug:
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Nov-01-06 03:07 PM
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2. she be smokin'
:smoke:
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LaraMN Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Nov-01-06 03:11 PM
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3. Hah! Funny...
I just made three batches of peanut butter and white chocolate chip cookies.

:o
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swimboy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Nov-01-06 03:33 PM
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4. Thank you, RL.
Some great statements crafted here and even some mentions of swimming! :D

And right after circling the sun it accelerates, just like a space probe, and the journey is on.

:hi:
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WritingIsMyReligion Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Nov-01-06 03:39 PM
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5. Interesting.
Don't like the stream of consciousness, though. :evilgrin:
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redqueen Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Nov-01-06 03:42 PM
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6. I love that!
Thanks, RL!

:loveya:
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