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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Nov-14-06 08:35 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Tue 11/14/06)
The Seduction

The loose unbuttoned cotton shirt you wear
over your buffed bare chest is haloed by
the window's light at dusk. Stretching, you sigh
"You're my best friend," then step into the snare,
my casually braided whirl of hair.
I move closer, you catch my Nimrod eye-
beware of hounds and hunters. I lose my
honorable intentions when you're near
and place my fingertips upon your face,
"You're my friend, too," words I can barely say.
You're standing close, so close I breathe your breath.
A blink, a sigh, you turn from my embrace
and face the window that gives you away.
The pane reflects your smile as dark as death.

Janet Bernichon

***************

RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Nov-14-06 11:09 AM
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1. this is cool--
sexy and scary at the same time
good and evil all at once


:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Nov-14-06 04:05 PM
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2. "sexy and scary at the same time" - My Type of...
...poem

RL
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BarenakedLady Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Nov-14-06 04:10 PM
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3. *sigh*
Me likey.
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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Nov-14-06 04:39 PM
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4. Wow
That was both tantalizing and a little depressing at the same time. I'm not used to experiencing both of those emotions at once. What a great poem...thanks! :hi:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Nov-14-06 06:39 PM
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5. Mmm....my dear Retro.........
I've had dreams like this ........

Yum

Thank you.........:hug:
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