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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed May-30-07 07:49 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Wed 5/30/2007)
Family Reunion

The divorced mother and her divorcing
daughter. The about-to-be ex-son-in-law
and the ex-husband's adopted son.
The divorcing daughter's child, who is

the step-nephew of the ex-husband's
adopted son. Everyone cordial:
the ex-husband's second wife
friendly to the first wife, warm

to the divorcing daughter's child's
great-grandmother, who was herself
long ago divorced. Everyone
grown used to the idea of divorce

Almost everyone has separated
from the landscape of childhood.
Collections of people in cities
are divorced from clean air and stars.

Toddlers in day care are parted
from working parents, schoolchildren
from the assumption of unbloodied
daylong safety. Old people die apart

from all they've gathered over time,
and in strange beds. Adults
grow estranged from a God
evidently divorced from history;

most are cut off from their own
histories, each of which waits
like a child left at day care.
What if you turned back for a moment

and put your arms around yours?
Yes, you might be late for work;
no, your history doesn't smell sweet
like a toddler's head. But look

at those small round wrists,
that short-legged, comical walk.
Caress your history—who else will?
Promise to come back later.

Pay attention when it asks you
simple questions: Where are we going?
Is it scary? What happened? Can
I have more now? Who is that?

Jeredith Merrin

****************

RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul




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BarenakedLady Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed May-30-07 07:52 AM
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1. Get out of my head!
'Pay attention when it asks you
simple questions: Where are we going?
Is it scary? What happened? Can
I have more now? Who is that?'


:hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed May-30-07 07:53 AM
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2. Sorry, I was invited in...
:D

:hug:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed May-30-07 11:36 AM
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3. Good morning, my dear Retro...
I like this!

How accurate it is, too...

Funny how this poet can take such a thing as divorce, and show its relevance to our whole life, our entire society...

Thank you...:hug:
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reyd reid reed Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed May-30-07 11:51 AM
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4. Such a powerful
yet simple message. Take a minute. Stop taking what and who we have for granted, it flies away so fast.

Thank you, RL.

:hug:

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