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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 08:54 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Sun 6/24/07)
Rest in This

A few pink streaks low in the east,
the sea fog rolls in—
let it pull you
away from the buzz
of motors and news
barefoot to the cliff
down the wooden steps
to the mudstone shelf
soothing to touch
then watch, along the fog’s edge
a kayak barely moving
parallel to shore.

Sit.
You once knew stillness—
breathe it in
let the ribs of a shell
brush the back of your hand
puffs of wind
on your cheek
and the sun’s
increasing warmth.
Close your eyes
and listen
to the length of every wave.

Rosie King

****************

RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul
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Droopy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 08:58 AM
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1. What a nice poem
I would like poetry much better if I could understand it. A lot of poetry is just over my head. That's why I like Langston Hughes and Charles Bukowski. They don't make things harder than they have to be.
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 08:58 AM
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2. beautiful -- i wish cwydro would see this and all the other
kayakers, too.

i especially love this line:

'barefoot to the cliff'

something about the use of the letter/sound 'f'.

thanks, retro.

:hi:
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BarenakedLady Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 09:36 AM
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3. very beautiful
I miss the Ocean.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 10:23 AM
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4. Very nice. Oh, and
I may have to PM you later.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 04:00 PM
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8. Got your PM
thanks!

RL
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xchrom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 11:40 AM
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5. carl sandberg -- fog

The fog comes
on little cat feet.

It sits looking
over harbor and city
on silent haunches
and then moves on.



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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 11:58 AM
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6. My dear Retro!
Hmmm....very beautiful!

Funny how the really good poets can take the simplest ideas, and make verbal music out of them...

I am sitting on that beach with her...

Really lovely!

Thank you...:hug:
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EFerrari Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 12:24 PM
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7. Here's a beachy one. :-)
Black triangle in light


While the others sleep, the black cat

Sits on the sill in a rectangle of light,

The only one in the dark kitchen, still

As an unwatched sculpture. This morning,

A quiet waiting wedge, the cat eyes

Some gulls ferry between sky and sand.



Perhaps knowing how near the sand

Dunes are, across the highway only, the cat

Presses the glass, paws her reflection, eyes

Never leaving the gulls just beyond the light

Warming her screened perch. Slowly, it’s morning

In that window. She sits, watching, still.



And she might stay all day, watching still.

The smell of the sea, the ping of blown sand

Tease her to the glass, testing her each morning.

Ancient patience meets disregard in the cat

Who measures the gulls’ flight in the cold light,

Noting the ravens’ clatter too, with great green eyes.



So much unsaid by those wide eyes.

Yet something about her suggests, “Be still,

Or, come closer, I will jump into the light

You play in. You’re playing, I know. The sand

Smells like a beach a grain at a time.” The cat

Stretches gently, jumps, finished for this morning.



I’d thought to paint her, there, some morning.

How to give the motion of her stillness to other eyes?

Or, show color condensing around this small monochrome
cat?

An early sketch shows promise but still

It’s only promise, not salt, flight or sand.

Here: A small black triangle on a pale plane of light.



She draws us there, summoning beach light

Slowly into the room. Brightest at mid morning,

But not bright now. The bunch grasses wave, trapping
sand

Blown across the highway, and the surfers’ eyes

Narrow against the wind, the ones still

Too young for shades, as they pass by window and cat.



As if you could outwalk the light world of her eyes,

Or the day’s flight from morning, sweeping over the
sand.

Or, forgive the still capture of this small black cat.
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Inchworm Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 04:12 PM
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9. Wonderful
I think I dozed off in the sand toward the end. I love it.

:thumbsup:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 05:23 PM
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10. ...
:hi:

RL
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