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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 10:58 PM
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My newest poem...
What is love?

Is it a thing?

An object of desire?

Is it the sea between our shores?

Or is it a bond?

A rope that tightly binds?

I don’t know...

I have no understanding of it...

All I know

Is that I love

And you are the man

Who lives in my heart.

Who occupies my mind

Who has conquered my soul

And when you touch me

With your glance

And your words

And your hands and mouth

All the world falls away


My mouth speaks

But when I am in your arms

There are no words from me...

Yet I would still be speaking......

Of my love.

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gemdem Donating Member (975 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 11:00 PM
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1. Beautiful
Truly.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 11:02 PM
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3. My dear gemdem....
Thank you...:hug:
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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 11:01 PM
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2. That is sooooooo beautiful, Peggy!
*sigh*

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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 11:03 PM
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4. My dear KC2...
Ah, thank you sweetie......

It makes me sigh too......:hug:
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fizzgig Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 11:04 PM
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5. wonderful, peggy
it's beautiful :hug:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 11:05 PM
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6. My dear kagehime...
Thank you......

It means a lot ...:hug:
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ForrestGump Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 11:08 PM
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7. I love it!!!

It also speaks the truth, 100%, though I admit that (in my mind, when I read it), I changed your man into a woman for my own selfish ends. This is a true story, Ms Peggy. Love is a beautiful song, la-la, la-la-la, la-la (it can be, anyway).

:hug:

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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 11:11 PM
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8. My dear Forrest...
Thank you, sweetie.....So glad you like it!

And you liked it enough to copycat it, too!

I'd expect you (and any man reading this) to change the gender...

I believe that love, true love, is always beautiful....:hug:
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blondie58 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 11:35 PM
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9. Peggy, that is beautiful
and with your permission, I would love to send it to my guy, of course I would give you the credit. He is kind of a romantic sap and I think that he would get something from this, also.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 11:39 PM
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10. My dear blondie58...
Oh, thank you!

OF COURSE you can send it to your guy! I would appreciate the credit, too, but I know you would give it...

I am honored that you find this worthy of sharing with your guy.....

:hug:
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GoddessOfGuinness Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 11:46 PM
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11. That is so sweet, Peggy...
I hope you share these with your honey! :D
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 11:48 PM
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13. My dear GoddessOfGuinness!
I haven't shown this to him yet.........

But believe me.......I will!

I suspect he'll like it.......

I hope he will, anyway...

;)
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Joe Fields Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 11:48 PM
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12. My dear California Peggy...

very nice use of metaphors and alliteration. Very nicely done. Love? It's the strongest poison and medicine of all....
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jun-24-07 11:50 PM
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14. My dear Joe Fields...
Oh, thank you.....

And I agree about love being the strongest poison and medicine of all........

It can make you well.......or ill...

I can't live without love in my life, not for one second... :hug:
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Inchworm Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jun-25-07 01:23 AM
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15. I will dream well sweet Peggy...
I got up for water on a low intake drinking night and caught this new poem.

It is loverly.

It is a question that has no concrete answer, "what is love." After discussing this my special love "who lives in my heart" and finding out the same thing, I decided it is what it is. That is all it needs to be.

:loveya:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jun-25-07 06:55 AM
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18. My dear Inchworm.......
Happy dreams to you, sweetie...

I am touched that you like this effort of mine...

Thank you!

:loveya:
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KitchenWitch Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jun-25-07 01:53 AM
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16. That is heavy duty!
:hi:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jun-25-07 06:56 AM
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19. My dear KitchenWitch!
Thanks, sweetie!

It numbers among my best, I think...

:hug:
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UrbScotty Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jun-25-07 02:13 AM
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17. My dear CaliforniaPeggy!
Beautiful! Of course, if it's not beautiful, it's not CaliforniaPeggy.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jun-25-07 06:57 AM
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20. My dear ih8thegop!
Oh my.........your kind words touch my heart...

What a compliment...

Thank you........:hug:
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SPKrazy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jun-25-07 06:59 AM
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21. Very moving...
thanks Peg...

:hug:

:loveya:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jun-25-07 07:03 AM
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22. My dear Southpawkicker...
Thank you, sweetie.......

I'm glad it moved you....

It's only 5 AM here....I couldn't sleep, god knows why...

I'm glad to be up, talking with you and all my good friends here...

:loveya:

:hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jun-25-07 08:10 AM
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23. Hmmmm, very nice
and a very lucky man indeed...

:hug:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jun-25-07 11:16 AM
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25. My dear Retro...
Oh, thank you...

Yes, he sure is...

:hug:
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BarenakedLady Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jun-25-07 09:19 AM
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24. Wow Peggy
That's very beautiful.

:loveya:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jun-25-07 11:17 AM
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26. My dear BarenakedLady...
Thank you, sweetie....

I don't know where these things come from, I really don't.........:hug:
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malta blue Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jun-25-07 11:22 AM
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27. That is beautiful Peggy and has brought
a smile to my face in this time of awful grief for my family.

Thank you.:hug:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jun-25-07 11:26 AM
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28. My dear malta blue....
Oh, sweetie......

I am privileged and honored that my little poem can help you right now....

Thank you for telling me...

It means the world to me to be able to help you...

You're welcome...:hug:
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