CaliforniaPeggy
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Sun Jun-24-07 10:58 PM
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What is love?
Is it a thing?
An object of desire?
Is it the sea between our shores?
Or is it a bond?
A rope that tightly binds?
I don’t know...
I have no understanding of it...
All I know
Is that I love
And you are the man
Who lives in my heart.
Who occupies my mind
Who has conquered my soul
And when you touch me
With your glance
And your words
And your hands and mouth
All the world falls away
My mouth speaks
But when I am in your arms
There are no words from me...
Yet I would still be speaking......
Of my love.
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Sun Jun-24-07 11:00 PM
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Sun Jun-24-07 11:01 PM
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2. That is sooooooo beautiful, Peggy! |
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Sun Jun-24-07 11:03 PM
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Ah, thank you sweetie......
It makes me sigh too......:hug:
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Sun Jun-24-07 11:04 PM
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Sun Jun-24-07 11:05 PM
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Thank you......
It means a lot ...:hug:
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Sun Jun-24-07 11:08 PM
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It also speaks the truth, 100%, though I admit that (in my mind, when I read it), I changed your man into a woman for my own selfish ends. This is a true story, Ms Peggy. Love is a beautiful song, la-la, la-la-la, la-la (it can be, anyway).
:hug:
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Sun Jun-24-07 11:11 PM
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Thank you, sweetie.....So glad you like it!
And you liked it enough to copycat it, too!
I'd expect you (and any man reading this) to change the gender...
I believe that love, true love, is always beautiful....:hug:
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Sun Jun-24-07 11:35 PM
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9. Peggy, that is beautiful |
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and with your permission, I would love to send it to my guy, of course I would give you the credit. He is kind of a romantic sap and I think that he would get something from this, also.
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Sun Jun-24-07 11:39 PM
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Oh, thank you!
OF COURSE you can send it to your guy! I would appreciate the credit, too, but I know you would give it...
I am honored that you find this worthy of sharing with your guy.....
:hug:
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Sun Jun-24-07 11:46 PM
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11. That is so sweet, Peggy... |
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I hope you share these with your honey! :D
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Sun Jun-24-07 11:48 PM
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13. My dear GoddessOfGuinness! |
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I haven't shown this to him yet.........
But believe me.......I will!
I suspect he'll like it.......
I hope he will, anyway...
;)
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Sun Jun-24-07 11:48 PM
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12. My dear California Peggy... |
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very nice use of metaphors and alliteration. Very nicely done. Love? It's the strongest poison and medicine of all....
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Sun Jun-24-07 11:50 PM
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14. My dear Joe Fields... |
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Oh, thank you.....
And I agree about love being the strongest poison and medicine of all........
It can make you well.......or ill...
I can't live without love in my life, not for one second... :hug:
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Mon Jun-25-07 01:23 AM
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15. I will dream well sweet Peggy... |
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I got up for water on a low intake drinking night and caught this new poem.
It is loverly.
It is a question that has no concrete answer, "what is love." After discussing this my special love "who lives in my heart" and finding out the same thing, I decided it is what it is. That is all it needs to be.
:loveya:
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Mon Jun-25-07 06:55 AM
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18. My dear Inchworm....... |
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Happy dreams to you, sweetie...
I am touched that you like this effort of mine...
Thank you!
:loveya:
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Mon Jun-25-07 01:53 AM
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Mon Jun-25-07 06:56 AM
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Thanks, sweetie!
It numbers among my best, I think...
:hug:
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Mon Jun-25-07 02:13 AM
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17. My dear CaliforniaPeggy! |
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Beautiful! Of course, if it's not beautiful, it's not CaliforniaPeggy.
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Mon Jun-25-07 06:57 AM
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Oh my.........your kind words touch my heart...
What a compliment...
Thank you........:hug:
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Mon Jun-25-07 06:59 AM
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thanks Peg...
:hug:
:loveya:
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Mon Jun-25-07 07:03 AM
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Thank you, sweetie.......
I'm glad it moved you....
It's only 5 AM here....I couldn't sleep, god knows why...
I'm glad to be up, talking with you and all my good friends here...
:loveya:
:hug:
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Mon Jun-25-07 08:10 AM
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and a very lucky man indeed...
:hug:
RL
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Mon Jun-25-07 11:16 AM
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Oh, thank you...
Yes, he sure is...
:hug:
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Mon Jun-25-07 09:19 AM
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That's very beautiful.
:loveya:
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Mon Jun-25-07 11:17 AM
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Thank you, sweetie....
I don't know where these things come from, I really don't.........:hug:
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Mon Jun-25-07 11:22 AM
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27. That is beautiful Peggy and has brought |
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a smile to my face in this time of awful grief for my family.
Thank you.:hug:
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Mon Jun-25-07 11:26 AM
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28. My dear malta blue.... |
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Oh, sweetie......
I am privileged and honored that my little poem can help you right now....
Thank you for telling me...
It means the world to me to be able to help you...
You're welcome...:hug:
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