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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jul-08-07 08:18 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Sun 7/8/07)
A Letter Home

In a bad year, my father went away
A hundred miles to take the only job
He could find. Two nights a week he would sit down
In his boardinghouse after a hard shift
In the open hearth and write a duty letter.
He hated telephones, being hard of hearing
And hard of speaking and just as hard of spending
Now that he had to save our car and our house
And feed us from long distance. He knew words
Of all kinds, knew them cold in Latin
And Greek, from crossword puzzles and cryptograms,
But hardly any of them would come from his mouth
Or find their way onto paper. He wrote my mother
Short plain sentences about the weather
And, folded inside each single page, for me,
In colored pencils, a tracing of a cartoon
From the funny papers: Popeye or Barney Google
Or Mutt and Jeff or the Katzenjammer Kids.
The voice-balloons hanging over their heads
Said, "Hope to see you soon" or "Hello, David."
And those would be his words for months on end.

I thank him now for his labor, his devotion
To duty and his doggedness. I was five,
And he was thirty-five. I have two daughters
As young as I was then (though I’m twice as old
As my father was). If I had to leave them
In a bad year, I’d want them to be good
To their mother and to love her as much as I did.
I’d miss them, and I’d want them to be happy
With or without me and to remember me.
If I could manage, I’d even write them love
In a letter home with traces of me inside.

David Wagoner

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RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul

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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jul-08-07 08:29 AM
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1. beautiful
it doesn't get any better than those last two lines:loveya:

:donut: :hi:
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jul-08-07 11:41 AM
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2. Very nice. nt
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jul-08-07 11:56 AM
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3. Good morning, my dear Retro!
Oh, how nice this is...

You can really feel the anxiety that that father is experiencing as he writes his duty letters...

And how his child felt, getting them...

And yes, the last two lines are wonderful!

Thank you, sweetie...:hug:
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Inchworm Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jul-08-07 11:56 AM
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4. A great story told here
"He hated telephones, being hard of hearing
And hard of speaking and just as hard of spending"

so he drew cartoons .. aww..

:thumbsup:
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