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trof Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jul-30-07 06:44 PM
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Ode to the Comb-over
Hymn to the Comb-Over

How the thickest of them erupt just
above the ear, cresting in waves so stiff
no wind can move them. Let us praise them
in all of their varieties, some skinny
as the bands of headphones, some rising
from a part that extends halfway around
the head, others four or five strings
stretched so taut the scalp resembles
a musical instrument. Let us praise the sprays
that hold them, and the combs that coax
such abundance to the front of the head
in the mirror, the combers entirely forget
the back. And let us celebrate the combers,
who address the old sorrow of time's passing
day after day, bringing out of the barrenness
of mid-life this ridiculous and wonderful
harvest, no wishful flag of hope, but, thick,
or thin, the flag itself, unfurled for us all
in subways, offices, and malls across America.
http://www.americanlifeinpoetry.org/current.html
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crim son Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jul-30-07 06:47 PM
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1. THAT is a fine poem.
:rofl:
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trof Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jul-30-07 06:53 PM
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2. But...but...it doesn't RHYME.
;-)
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crim son Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jul-30-07 07:07 PM
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3. THAT is a fine piece of poetic prose
or free verse, or whatever you want to call it. :D
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LibraLiz1973 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jul-30-07 07:18 PM
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4. It is a thing of beauty
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trof Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jul-31-07 06:52 PM
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5. FANTASTIC comb over!
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