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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-07-07 01:39 AM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poem Thread, 8/6/07 Bonus (by request: Marty Hebrank)
Edited on Tue Aug-07-07 01:58 AM by BlueIris
"Blind Overture"

Increasingly voluptuous

range blindly
onto your property.

For you, being sightly.
Headlights sampling green

circus music seemed right
for those limited circles.

A cart, an engine
dependent on the contoured landscape

mostly lists.

Pull one stake from the shadows
the groundskeeper would have to slog through

those external circumstances,
plucking a minor tune out
near the bauble lights.

Sand-trap. Water-trap. Shadow-trap.

When I put my flesh to your lips
the first time.

Shush the air. Smite it. Push it down flat.

It's a development then.

Bends in
tenderly to teach.

—Marty Hebrank
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-07-07 07:01 AM
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1. Kick.
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I Have A Dream Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-07-07 11:47 AM
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2. Thanks, BI! n/t
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-07-07 12:14 PM
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4. Sure thing! nt
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-07-07 11:52 AM
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3. That is really lovely
Thank you. (And keep up the good work :thumbsup: )
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