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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-25-07 11:42 PM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poem Thread, 8/25/07
Edited on Sun Aug-26-07 12:05 AM by BlueIris
"An Anointing"

Boys have to slash their fingers to become brothers. Girls trade their Kotex, me and Molly do in the mall's public facility.

Me and Molly never remember each other's birthdays. On purpose. We don't like scores of any kind. We don't wear watches or weigh ourselves.

Me and Molly have tasted beer. We drank our shampoo. We went to the doctor together and lifted our specimen cups in a toast. We didn't drink the stuff. We just gargled.

When me and Molly get the urge, we are careful to put it back exactly as we found it. It looks untouched.

Between the two of us, me and Molly have 20/20 vision.

Me and Molly are in eighth grade for good. We like it here. We adore the view. We looked both ways and decided not to cross the street. Others who'd been to the other side didn't return. It was a trap.

Me and Molly don't double-date. We don't multiply anything. We don't know our multiplication tables from a coffee table. We'll never be decent waitresses, indecent ones maybe.

Me and Molly do not believe in going ape or going bananas or going Dutch. We go as who we are. We go as what we are.

Me and Molly have wiped each other's asses with ferns. Made emergency tampons of our fingers. Me and Molly make do with what we have.

Me and Molly are in love with wiping the blackboard with each other's hair. The chalk gives me and Molly an idea of what old age is like; it is dusty and makes us sneeze. We are allergic to it.

Me and Molly, that's M and M, melt in your mouth.

What are we doing in your mouth? Me and Molly bet you'll never guess. Not in a million years. We plan to be around that long. Together that long. Even if we must freeze the moment and treat the photograph like the real thing.

Me and Molly don't care what people think. We're just glad they do.

Me and Molly lick the dew off the morning grasses but taste no honey till we lick each other's tongues.

We wear full maternity sails. We boat upon my broken water. The katabatic action begins, Molly down my canal, binnacle first, her water breaking in me like an annointing.


—Thalia Moss
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-25-07 11:51 PM
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1. My dear BlueIris...
OK......a weird one, but tantalizing, fascinating...

Two people?

Interesting images, interesting lives!

Thank you!

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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-26-07 12:02 AM
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3. Thank you, C-Peg! This is one of my favorite poems ever.
Well, basically all the poems I am posting are my favorites, but this one holds a special place in my heart. I found it, appropriately enough, in 8th grade, and it has stayed with me since. It was one of the first poems that helped open my mind up to what the mysterious and majestic faculties of poetry could do in a skilled artist's hands.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-26-07 12:00 AM
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2. By way of explanation, here is a statement by the author about this poem:
(Moss wrote this of "An Anointing" in The Best American Poetry 1992)

"'An Anointing' is all in italics, just as it should be, I think, in order to consecrate the moment when these two girls simultaneously become aware of personal holiness, of the sacredness just of existence. What is wondrous is the simultaneity; both girls arrive at identical knowledge with the exact timing that permits sharing and therefore communion. It is poem of unity where unity may also mean acquisition of self-wholeness, sort of like the reintegration of multiple personalities into one. Each learns to be her own salvation, and the poem is a celebration of that learning. One praises, elevates the other at the same time. It is a poem of exemplary self-esteem and of both personal and community triumph. The poem emphasizes the logic of discovery and insists upon honest exploration of identity. Accordingly, the poem is also about acceptance. Molly and the speaker quite simply are best friends, two adolescent girls who recognize the potential of their relationship to be their only legitimate claim to true love. These are such empowering, such liberating ideas and sentiments that the occasion of the poem is immortalized. No matter what occurs in their lives, this moment will always be for them, just as it was, as it is. As for the lesbian implications of the poem, well, the are absolutely necessary, fundamental to the girls' discovery. Whether or not their lives are eventually heterosexually realized, they need to first come to terms with their femaleness in ways conducive to triumph, respect, integrity and joy. They discover what is wonderful and worthy, perhaps even superior, in being female, so are therefore most able to encourage and praise each other. All needs are met. They are girls without deficits. They are so whole and so aware of their vitality that they know they qualify as goddesses. And just as supernatural beings have to do, Molly and the speaker give birth to each other. They do whatever they have to do. With such ability, how can they ever be without what they need? So, yes, they’re a bit smug, but nevertheless, they are enviable.

Is Molly 'real'? Indeed she is within the scope of the poem, but this Molly is not based on anything more than my own feeling of completion. If these girls had to be derived from reality, then I would say that they are two parts of myself, embracing and coming together; me getting acquainted with me as only I can. Beyond that, the poem is an attempt to recapture the best and mischievous part of youth, a real exercise in curiosity and approval."
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-26-07 12:15 AM
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4. Isn't that sweet?
Sigh.
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I Have A Dream Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-26-07 10:31 AM
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11. Yes, very sweet.
Most young women begin to lose their confidence at this point in their lives; it's nice to see that they're going in the opposite direction towards wholeness knowing that they're perfect just the way they are.

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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-26-07 10:57 AM
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13. Ah, there you are.
And I see my poem has received it's daily stealth rec. Excellent.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-26-07 12:44 AM
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5. Kick.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-26-07 12:59 AM
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6. Oh, come on; this is so great.
I will be so sad if people don't read it.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-26-07 04:18 AM
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7. Kick.
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Callalily Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-26-07 06:27 AM
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8. You're right BlueIris
This is a great poem. Anointing is a perfect title.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-26-07 07:09 AM
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9. Thank you!
Yes, we are right.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-26-07 08:53 AM
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10. Kick.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-26-07 10:55 AM
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12. Kick.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-26-07 04:53 PM
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14. Kick.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-26-07 08:42 PM
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15. Kick.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Aug-27-07 03:01 AM
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16. Kick.
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