SOteric
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Tue Feb-03-04 03:48 AM
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I am filled with love like a melon with seeds, I am ripe and dripping sweet juices. If you knock gently on my belly it will thrum ripe, ripe.
I am high green summer with the strawberries just ending and the blueberries colouring, with the roses tumbling like fat Persian kittens, the golden horns of squash blowing.
The day after a storm the leaves gleam. The world is clear as a just washed picture window. The air whips its fine silk through the hands. Every last bird has an idea to insist on.
I am trying to work and instead I drip love for you like a honeycomb. I am devoid of phantasies clean as rainwater waiting to flow all over your skin.
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GOPisEvil
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Tue Feb-03-04 08:14 AM
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1. You sure can turn a phrase. |
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That put a smile on my face this morning. :-)
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Tue Feb-03-04 10:05 AM
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Tue Feb-03-04 02:31 PM
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You can turn an image like no other.
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buddhamama
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Tue Feb-03-04 02:38 PM
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this really is incredible, dear.
what's inside of you is pouring out, leaving me speechless.
thank you.
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Tue Feb-03-04 08:01 PM
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5. I'm not entirely convinced |
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that following the arrows on the concrete or the direction of the flow of the water after a hard rain is the way for me to go. At times torn in two directions by my head and my heart, and my feet. It's a slow drizzle now in this crowded street I just wish to god it would rain but as I look to the sky, all directions I see clouds and the hint of some snow. I'll follow the snowflakes on the wind and hope they teach me to fly I'm still not convinced which direction to go When there's a hard rain, but god, do I love the snow.
Did I just see an exit sign? probably so.
Great verse, SOteric. Happy days to you - :)
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