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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-15-08 10:45 AM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 2/15/08
Edited on Fri Feb-15-08 10:48 AM by BlueIris
"In an Old House"

In an old house with many fireplaces
That my father took me long ago to visit,
A stairway from the first floor to the third
Slanted, dark, inwalled without a landing.
Nothing else charmed me like that climbable closet
Built, I thought, for one who would have explored
The shuddery penetralia of caves.
"For servants," they told me, after all my guesses,
Who crept between the scrubbing and the mending
And had a story left out of their lives.

—Spencer Brown
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-15-08 10:48 AM
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1. You are beacon
in the darkness. Bless you, BlueIris.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-15-08 10:52 AM
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2. Thanks, hon.
I try.

Picking out good poems for this environment is tough, though. Loungers' taste in poetry is so different from mine.
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Westegg Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-15-08 03:30 PM
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6. Yet I know in advance that your choice...
...will be the perfect one, for that moment. And it always is.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-15-08 03:40 PM
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7. You flatter me. I think I've "blown it" WRT reading the Lounge "mood" a couple of times.
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Westegg Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-15-08 04:25 PM
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8. I hope you keep feeling it's worth the risk.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-15-08 12:26 PM
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3. My dear BlueIris...
I've seen those staircases, and they are scary...

This is the perfect poem for capturing their reality...

Thank you!

:hi:
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-15-08 12:35 PM
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4. My pleasure.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-15-08 02:08 PM
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5. Kick.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Feb-16-08 05:18 AM
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9. Kick.
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