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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Feb-21-08 08:22 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Thu 2/21/2008)
Prayer

Sweet Jesus, let her save you, let her take
your hands and hold them to her breasts,
slip the sandals from your feet, lay your body down
on sheets beaten clean against the fountain stones.
Let her rest her dark head on your chest,
let her tongue lift the hairs like a sword tip
parting the reeds, let her lips burnish
your neck, let your eyes be wet with pleasure.
Let her keep you from that other life, as a mother
keeps a child from the brick lip of a well,
though the rope and bucket shine and clang,
though the water's hidden silk and mystery call.
Let her patter soothe you and her passions
distract you, let her show you the light
storming the windows of her kitchen, peaches
in a wooden bowl, a square of blue cloth
she has sewn to her skirt to cover the tear.
What could be more holy than the curve of her back
as she sits, her hands opening a plum.
What could be more sacred than her eyes,
fierce and complicated as the truth, your life
rising behind them, your name on her lips.
Stay there, in her bare house, the black pots
hung from pegs, bread braided and glazed
on the table, a clay jug of violet wine.
There is the daily sacrament of rasp and chisel,
another chair to be made, shelves to be hewn
cleanly and even and carefully joined
to the sun-scrubbed walls, a sharp knife
for carving odd chunks of wood into small toys
for the children. Oh Jesus, close your eyes
and listen to it, the air is alive with bird calls
and bees, the dry rustle of palm leaves,
her distracted song as she washes her feet.
Let your death be quiet and ordinary.
Either life you choose will end in her arms.

Dorianne Laux

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:hi:

RL
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lizziegrace Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Feb-21-08 08:39 AM
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1. ...
a safe harbor. An escape. Being cared for and allowed to be still. It's as close to heaven as can be found here on earth. We all crave it. We all need it. :hug:

I love Dorianne Laux's work. It's a perfect poem for today.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Feb-21-08 08:40 AM
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2. sigh
Let your death be quiet and ordinary.
Either life you choose will end in her arms.


:hug:

RL
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lizziegrace Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Feb-21-08 08:51 AM
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Edited on Thu Feb-21-08 08:53 AM by lizziegrace
"Let her patter soothe you and her passions
distract you, let her show you the light
storming the windows of her kitchen


I know exactly how you feel.

:hug:

sigh...
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xchrom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Feb-21-08 08:59 AM
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4. what if the Pieta was mary magdalen?
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lizziegrace Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Feb-21-08 09:03 AM
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5. That crossed my mind too...
:)

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hisownpetard Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Feb-21-08 04:56 PM
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6. Breath-taking.
:hi:
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