CaliforniaPeggy
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Sat Mar-01-08 11:36 PM
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A Poem for Saturday Night... |
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Such promise in the bed
Chaste when made
The bedspread tidy and smooth
The pillows covered to keep their secrets
Everything tucked in
Unmade, the story’s different
Has the promise been kept?
Was there pleasure?
And sharing? You’ll need lots of that...
Laughter too
But not from tickling
But from fingers stroking all those lively nerves
Limbs akimbo
Mouths for kissing
Dark wet places for pleasuring
Sharing is the highest joy
You’ll keep the promise
And it will keep you whole.
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Sat Mar-01-08 11:43 PM
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It's as if you know my thoughts, sometimes... it's a little scary, even!
Thank you for sharing that. :hug:
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Sat Mar-01-08 11:51 PM
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Ah, sweetie...
We do share a lot of things in common, I think...
Glad you like it...:hug:
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Sat Mar-01-08 11:56 PM
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3. Ms. C-Peg! That is excellent! |
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Sat Mar-01-08 11:58 PM
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Oh, thank you so much!
Praise indeed from Madam Poetry herself...
I am truly honored...:blush:
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Sun Mar-02-08 12:16 AM
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Sun Mar-02-08 12:18 AM
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7. My dear Apinionated... |
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OK....I hope bodice ripper-y works for you?
Thanks for coming by tonight!
:hi:
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Sun Mar-02-08 12:16 AM
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Sun Mar-02-08 12:19 AM
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9. My dear otherlander... |
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Yes, it is...
I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I did writing it!
:hi:
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Sun Mar-02-08 12:18 AM
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8. It's sinking in just how much of a sensualist you are. |
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Sun Mar-02-08 12:21 AM
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10. My dear Prisoner_Number_Six! |
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You mean you're just figuring this out?:evilgrin:
I sure as hell am, baby!
Thank you...
I'm so pleased you like it...:hug:
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Sun Mar-02-08 01:57 AM
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Erotic, but mostly left to the reader to fill it in.
The last three lines are the best...so completely true.
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Sun Mar-02-08 02:23 AM
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Well, sometimes it's best to let the reader fill it in...
I really felt the truth of those last lines...
In all my years, I hadn't realized that they were true, either...
Thank you...:hug:
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Sun Mar-02-08 02:27 AM
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I'll be in someones bunk :P
melikes :)
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Sun Mar-02-08 02:29 AM
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Meglad youlike!
And just which bunk do you think you're going into, young man?
Just kidding!
Thank you...:hug:
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Sun Mar-02-08 02:34 AM
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15. daggonit.. I'm not tired or drunk enough |
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Sun Mar-02-08 02:48 AM
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16. Very sensual and tender. |
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Sun Mar-02-08 02:51 AM
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I appreciate your very kind comments...
I did want to have it sound that way...
Thank you!
:hug:
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Sun Mar-02-08 03:30 AM
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18. This sounds very sexual in nature, my Dear California Peggy!!!! |
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Ohhhh!!! If I knew you were that kind of person, I would have written you poems of my own in the past here! But, I'm no poet, so I'll just say that this was a very beautifully written piece of literary love and it takes an awful lot of guts to bear your literary soul here...very nice work, indeed. I am touched
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Sun Mar-02-08 11:55 AM
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Ah, indeed, you have figured me out...
I don't show that side often, but it's always there...
I'm so pleased that you enjoyed my work!
And I don't feel one bit brave...
I always need to express myself...and so I do...
Thank you for your very kind words, sweetie! :hug:
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Sun Mar-02-08 12:14 PM
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The pillows covered to keep their secrets Everything tucked in
Works on the surface, and also on a deeper level...
:applause:
RL
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Sun Mar-02-08 12:17 PM
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I was really hoping you would comment on this one...
Thank you!
I'm being tutored by my teacher from last semester...
I'm going to send this one along with my homework poem to her, tomorrow...
I hope she agrees with you!
It means so damn much to have a professional writer like yourself comment here...
I really am honored...
:hug:
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Sun Mar-02-08 12:58 PM
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22. I'm hardly a professional writer... |
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