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Mon Mar-10-08 06:31 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Mon 3/10/2008) |
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A Kiss
One wave falling forward meets another wave falling forward. Well-water, hand-hauled, mineral, cool, could be a kiss, or pastures fiery green after rain, before the grazers. The kiss — like a shoal of fish whipped one way, another way, like the fever dreams of a million monkeys — the kiss carry me — closer than your carotid artery — to you.
Thomas Lux
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:hi:
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Mon Mar-10-08 07:44 AM
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I think that's appropriate... ;)
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Mon Mar-10-08 05:33 PM
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Mon Mar-10-08 07:47 AM
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2. "(L)ike the fever dreams/of a million monkeys..." |
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Mon Mar-10-08 08:04 AM
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3. closer than your carotid artery -- |
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damn -- doesn't that just give ya chills.
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Mon Mar-10-08 06:08 PM
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7. Up and down my, well, arteries... |
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Mon Mar-10-08 06:08 PM
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8. Thought of you when I found this... |
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Mon Mar-10-08 05:07 PM
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Beautiful...
Thank you...
*sigh*
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Mon Mar-10-08 06:39 PM
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9. I love the monkey reference! |
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hehe.
like the fever dreams of a million monkeys
Loverly!
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Mon Mar-10-08 06:41 PM
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10. Yeah, that's a great image |
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