CaliforniaPeggy
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Thu Apr-03-08 10:39 PM
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The opening line was spoken by someone Tuesday night at the open mic I went to...
And I thought, "What a great line! I see a poem emerging from this!"
This is not my usual work...
I do hope you like it...
Never piss off a woman poet
She has powers you cannot imagine
Worse than a voodoo doll
She will
Incarcerate your soul
In an Iron Maiden
And strut away laughing
While your soul screams
As it thrashes against the spikes
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Thu Apr-03-08 10:49 PM
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1. Okay, I'm recruiting you to write lyrics... |
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That was pretty frikkin' rock and roll right there. :)
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Thu Apr-03-08 10:54 PM
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Wow!
You just made my day!
Do you realize that I am sixty-four years old?
Hey, this old dame has a kick in her yet!
Thank you!
:woohoo: :woohoo:
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Thu Apr-03-08 11:20 PM
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15. Hmm... well, this is a little simple, but I think it works. |
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Thu Apr-03-08 11:26 PM
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16. Alas...I cannot get it to play! |
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Thu Apr-03-08 11:37 PM
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17. I'll try and convert it to something you can play in your browser. |
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Thu Apr-03-08 11:40 PM
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I hope you can...
I really want to hear it!
:)
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Thu Apr-03-08 11:51 PM
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Thu Apr-03-08 11:56 PM
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Oh my god!
That was great! You have a great voice!
I am truly honored...never has anyone used my lyrics for a song!
Thank you so much!
:bounce: :bounce:
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Fri Apr-04-08 12:00 AM
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21. Sometimes I just pick up the guitar and stuff flows out. :) |
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But not so much with words, unfortunately. So a lot of my stuff ends up getting lost because I don't have anything to put it to, so I forget what I came up with. :P
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Fri Apr-04-08 12:02 AM
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22. Well, you sounded great! |
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And....check your PM!
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Thu Apr-03-08 10:51 PM
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2. My dear California Peggy! |
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That is a powerful and chilling poem with serious meaning.
I like it much!
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Thu Apr-03-08 10:55 PM
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I'm so glad you like it!
It is far, far removed from my normal romantic, mushy, sentimental stuff...
Thank you!
:woohoo: :woohoo:
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Thu Apr-03-08 11:08 PM
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:wow:
My dear California Peggy, that is much more intense that just dropping an "f"-bomb.
I promise to never say anything negative about you... not that i could.
:scared:
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Thu Apr-03-08 11:12 PM
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9. My dear madinmaryland... |
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Oh, sweetie...not to worry!
I am really not like this...well, not very much, anyway!
You can say anything you want to, OK?
It is an intense poem...
Thank you...
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Thu Apr-03-08 11:09 PM
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Watch out for us women poets....GRRRRRR
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Thu Apr-03-08 11:13 PM
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10. My dear Rising Phoenix! |
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Glad you do!
Yeah, watch out for US!
Thank you...
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Thu Apr-03-08 11:10 PM
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Thu Apr-03-08 11:15 PM
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11. My dear UndertheOcean! |
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Thu Apr-03-08 11:11 PM
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8. Dark Tirade's right... |
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I could imagine my son's metalesque band writing music to go with that...
Rock on, Peggy! :headbang:
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Thu Apr-03-08 11:16 PM
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12. My dear GoddessOfGuinness! |
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How about that?
At my age...writing rock lyrics!
Thanks, sweetie...
So glad you like it!
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Thu Apr-03-08 11:16 PM
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Thu Apr-03-08 11:18 PM
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Well, you know I love you too!
Aw....thanks...
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Fri Apr-04-08 12:03 AM
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Fri Apr-04-08 12:07 AM
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24. Well, I thank you, my dear emilyg! |
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Fri Apr-04-08 12:09 AM
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very vivid, peggy, it's fantastic
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Fri Apr-04-08 12:13 AM
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Oh, thanks, sweetie!
And, even better: DarkTirade has set it to music in #19...have a listen!
I don't know where my poetry comes from...
And maybe it's just as well that I don't! :scared:
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Fri Apr-04-08 12:16 AM
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Who knew you had a "dark side"? You scare me.
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Fri Apr-04-08 12:22 AM
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Everybody has a dark side, sweetie...
Even me...
Don't be scared, though...
It's not a major part of me...
Just a tiny bit...
I'm really the way you normally see me here...
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Fri Apr-04-08 03:46 PM
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29. My dear CaliforniaPeggy! |
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If you have all these power, then PROVE IT!
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Fri Apr-04-08 04:23 PM
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Lol!
Did I say I did? I think not!
I hope you enjoyed my little work, sweetie!
:evilgrin:
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