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Mon Apr-21-08 06:37 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Mon 4/21/2008) |
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Antilamentation
Regret nothing. Not the cruel novels you read to the end just to find out who killed the cook. Not the insipid movies that made you cry in the dark, in spite of your intelligence, your sophistication. Not the lover you left quivering in a hotel parking lot, the one you beat to the punchline, the door, or the one who left you in your red dress and shoes, the ones that crimped your toes, don't regret those. Not the nights you called god names and cursed your mother, sunk like a dog in the livingroom couch, chewing your nails and crushed by loneliness. You were meant to inhale those smoky nights over a bottle of flat beer, to sweep stuck onion rings across the dirty restaurant floor, to wear the frayed coat with its loose buttons, its pockets full of struck matches. You've walked those streets a thousand times and still you end up here. Regret none of it, not one of the wasted days you wanted to know nothing, when the lights from the carnival rides were the only stars you believed in, loving them for their uselessness, not wanting to be saved. You've traveled this far on the back of every mistake, ridden in dark-eyed and morose but calm as a house after the TV set has been pitched out the upstairs window. Harmless as a broken ax. Emptied of expectation. Relax. Don't bother remembering any of it. Let's stop here, under the lit sign on the corner, and watch all the people walk by.
Dorianne Laux
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:hi:
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Mon Apr-21-08 07:00 AM
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Edited on Mon Apr-21-08 07:08 AM by lizziegrace
wow...
:hug:
Regret and guilt are my best friends. x(
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Mon Apr-21-08 05:22 PM
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Mon Apr-21-08 08:33 PM
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Mon Apr-21-08 07:07 AM
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I'm in thew clear
You were meant to inhale those smoky nights over a bottle of flat beer, to sweep stuck onion rings across the dirty restaurant floor, to wear the frayed coat with its loose buttons, its pockets full of struck matches.
I really like this one.
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Mon Apr-21-08 08:30 PM
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5. Yeah, this one is good... |
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Mon Apr-21-08 03:19 PM
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Oh boy...
This is a sad one...
But I still like it...
Thank you!
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Mon Apr-21-08 09:43 PM
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Not the lover you left quivering in a hotel parking lot, the one you beat to the punchline, the door, or the one who left you in your red dress and shoes, the ones that crimped your toes, don't regret those.
my red dress is a chanel -- if somebody left me wearing that -- i'd stab him with my stilletto heel.
my mail box gave me a book to day from xenith booksellers!!!
:applause: :woohoo: :applause:
thank you.
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Mon Apr-21-08 09:49 PM
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I got 2 more yesterday that you might like...
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Mon Apr-21-08 10:04 PM
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10. oh cool -- what are they? |
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i'm definitely game for some more.
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Mon Apr-21-08 09:53 PM
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"my red dress is a chanel -- if somebody left me wearing that -- i'd stab him with my stilletto heel."
:rofl:
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Mon Apr-21-08 10:07 PM
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Mon Apr-21-08 10:13 PM
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13. lol -- yeah me in a red dress -- |
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:scared: -- but still i am Teh Fierce!
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