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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-21-08 06:37 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Mon 4/21/2008)
Antilamentation

Regret nothing. Not the cruel novels you read
to the end just to find out who killed the cook.
Not the insipid movies that made you cry in the dark,
in spite of your intelligence, your sophistication.
Not the lover you left quivering in a hotel parking lot,
the one you beat to the punchline, the door, or the one
who left you in your red dress and shoes, the ones
that crimped your toes, don't regret those.
Not the nights you called god names and cursed
your mother, sunk like a dog in the livingroom couch,
chewing your nails and crushed by loneliness.
You were meant to inhale those smoky nights
over a bottle of flat beer, to sweep stuck onion rings
across the dirty restaurant floor, to wear the frayed
coat with its loose buttons, its pockets full of struck matches.
You've walked those streets a thousand times and still
you end up here. Regret none of it, not one
of the wasted days you wanted to know nothing,
when the lights from the carnival rides
were the only stars you believed in, loving them
for their uselessness, not wanting to be saved.
You've traveled this far on the back of every mistake,
ridden in dark-eyed and morose but calm as a house
after the TV set has been pitched out the upstairs
window. Harmless as a broken ax. Emptied
of expectation. Relax. Don't bother remembering
any of it. Let's stop here, under the lit sign
on the corner, and watch all the people walk by.

Dorianne Laux

***********************

:hi:

RL
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lizziegrace Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-21-08 07:00 AM
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1. ...
Edited on Mon Apr-21-08 07:08 AM by lizziegrace
wow...

:hug:

Regret and guilt are my best friends. x(

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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-21-08 05:22 PM
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4. Yeah...
tell me about it...

RL
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lizziegrace Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-21-08 08:33 PM
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6. ...
:hug:
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Inchworm Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-21-08 07:07 AM
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2. Whew
I'm in thew clear

You were meant to inhale those smoky nights
over a bottle of flat beer, to sweep stuck onion rings
across the dirty restaurant floor, to wear the frayed
coat with its loose buttons, its pockets full of struck matches.


I really like this one.

:donut:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-21-08 08:30 PM
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5. Yeah, this one is good...
:hi:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-21-08 03:19 PM
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3. My dear Retro...
Oh boy...

This is a sad one...

But I still like it...

Thank you!

:hi:
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xchrom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-21-08 09:43 PM
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7. ...
Not the lover you left quivering in a hotel parking lot,
the one you beat to the punchline, the door, or the one
who left you in your red dress and shoes, the ones
that crimped your toes, don't regret those.

my red dress is a chanel -- if somebody left me wearing that -- i'd stab him with my stilletto heel.

my mail box gave me a book to day from xenith booksellers!!!

:applause: :woohoo: :applause:

thank you.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-21-08 09:49 PM
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8. yay!
I got 2 more yesterday that you might like...

:hi:

RL
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xchrom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-21-08 10:04 PM
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10. oh cool -- what are they?
i'm definitely game for some more.
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lizziegrace Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-21-08 09:53 PM
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9. Hehe...
"my red dress is a chanel -- if somebody left me wearing that -- i'd stab him with my stilletto heel."

:rofl:

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xchrom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-21-08 10:07 PM
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11. i am Teh Fierce!
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lizziegrace Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-21-08 10:07 PM
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12. Fear teh fierce!!
:scared:
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xchrom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-21-08 10:13 PM
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13. lol -- yeah me in a red dress --
:scared: -- but still i am Teh Fierce!
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