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Thu Apr-24-08 07:17 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Thu 4/24/2008) |
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Stolen Moments
What happened, happened once. So now it’s best in memory—an orange he sliced: the skin unbroken, then the knife, the chilled wedge lifted to my mouth, his mouth, the thin membrane between us, the exquisite orange, tongue, orange, my nakedness and his, the way he pushed me up against the fridge— Now I get to feel his hands again, the kiss that didn’t last, but sent some neural twin flashing wildly through the cortex. Love’s merciless, the way it travels in and keeps emitting light. Beside the stove we ate an orange. And there were purple flowers on the table. And we still had hours.
Kim Addonizio
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Thu Apr-24-08 07:19 AM
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I've got it in a collection and keep going back to it.
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Thu Apr-24-08 07:20 AM
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2. "keep going back to it" |
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Yeah, I do that too...
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Thu Apr-24-08 07:25 AM
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Thu Apr-24-08 07:54 AM
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the way he pushed me up against the fridge—
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Thu Apr-24-08 11:57 AM
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Now I get to feel his hands again, the kiss that didn’t last
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Thu Apr-24-08 08:43 AM
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Thu Apr-24-08 10:43 AM
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Wow, how fabulously erotic...
And yet so understated too...
It leaves so much to the imagination, but still...
Delicious...
Thank you!
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Thu Apr-24-08 12:21 PM
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9. I have never heard that one |
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it sent chills down my spine. Good ones.
Great poem, I will have to look up that author.
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Thu Apr-24-08 05:24 PM
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Edited on Thu Apr-24-08 05:24 PM by RetroLounge
Get her book What is this thing called love.
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