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Thu Jun-05-08 06:29 AM
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Bathing
He always bathed afterwards, slipping his fine and sticky genitals over the cool rim of the porcelain sink. She lay in the other room smoking and staring tiredly out the window. The tiny sounds of the suds came to her worrisomely. The suck-suck of his hand lathering soap into his tight, dark curls. Then the farewell groan of the drain. The energetic flap of the towel. When he was before her again, his teeth covered by a smile, the sweat and stench removed, she studied him from the crushed bed, admiring his cruel beauty, her body still marked and odorous. His, clean and unstained, amnesiac already. Kate Daniels
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Thu Jun-05-08 07:47 AM
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Thu Jun-05-08 08:27 AM
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She lay in the other room smoking and staring tiredly out the window.
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Thu Jun-05-08 01:17 PM
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Great imagery...
Both physically and emotionally...
Thank you!
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Thu Jun-05-08 02:09 PM
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has been peepin' in mah winders! :P
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