BlueIris
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Wed Jun-11-08 01:12 PM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 6/11/08 |
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"Midweek Poem"
I crawled outside my body through my mouth and fingers, out both ears, waited in air while I did a crossword, filed my nails, told a small lie, ate part of a salad, then crawled back in and slept through the night, silent as a chair in a darkened room, completely forgetting this dream of itself before I awoke the next morning.
—Tom Chandler
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Wed Jun-11-08 02:47 PM
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Oooh, I really like this!
Even though it's weird, it's a good weird!
GREAT imagery!
Thank you!
:hug:
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BlueIris
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Wed Jun-11-08 03:33 PM
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2. Yeah, I'm not sure what put me in such a freaky-deaky mood this week. |
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Maybe it's the weather, but in recent days, my tastes have run toward the bizarre.
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Wed Jun-11-08 05:41 PM
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Thu Jun-12-08 12:37 AM
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5. That's pleasantly surreal. |
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That's a guy who had some good experience with recreational drugs. :P
I'd like to have like that.
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Thu Jun-12-08 11:37 AM
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6. Heh. Yes, yes it is. nt |
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