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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jun-14-08 09:29 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Sat 6/14/2008)
On Realizing there are too many poems
about onions, pears, and brueghel's painting


While cutting an onion I am reminded of Brueghel,
the lack of tears in his art. Mine are everywhere, yet his
paradise of dancers runs dry--too busy with the frenzy
of living--and even in The Triumph, the littered dying

do not weep--busy, in their own way, with the frenzy
of becoming dead. But I am still alone in the kitchen,
no orgiastic throng to advance my sullen mood as art;
there is time enough for me to cry. Who will stop me?

The pears ripening on the sill--bitter, mealy, and hard--
are making more of themselves, growing crisp and fresh
in the wan, white light of the world. Neutral, indifferent,
they cannot tell me what to do. So I think about layers

because they are there, because they are easy. Onions
cannot help being metaphors; they would rather stay
mysteries in the moist soil. They would rather I unwrap
myself. If I could, I tell them through the blur, I would.

Margaret Clark

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:hi:

RL
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xchrom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jun-14-08 10:01 AM
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1. ...
Onions
cannot help being metaphors; they would rather stay
mysteries in the moist soil. They would rather I unwrap
myself. If I could, I tell them through the blur, I would.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jun-14-08 11:29 AM
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3. Peeling the onion
painful but necessary at times...

:hi:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jun-14-08 10:13 AM
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2. My dear Retro...
Poets see the world rather differently than ordinary folk, don't they?

The light dances through this one in a strange, vivid way...

I like it!

Thanks...

:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jun-14-08 11:30 AM
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4. ...
:hi:

RL
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