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Rabrrrrrr Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-25-08 09:08 AM
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Match Game Story Style: "Olga Orange-head sat smugly in the fo's'cle, cursing the ship __ bloodbath"
Odd? Sure it is. But so am I.

Ten words or more in the space, make a funny and great and wonderful story out of it, and we'll all come in and give you great applause and kudos and look upon you with awe and envy.
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Rabrrrrrr Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-25-08 03:54 PM
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1. Time for a kick
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Rhiannon12866 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-25-08 09:09 PM
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2. Olga Orange-head sat smugly in the fo's'cle, cursing the ship,
which had successfully given up all passengers and crew. Though she was doomed to hiding forever, she had provisions and could swim, if she only had the chance, and was inwardly grateful that she'd avoided being killed by the pirates who had stolen the ship, thrown everyone overboard and taken over, in a terrible bloodbath.x(


BTW, here's the ship:
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CreekDog Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-25-08 09:48 PM
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3. is it me or do your clues lack the essential essence of the game?
:shrug:
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Rhiannon12866 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-25-08 09:51 PM
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4. I wasn't sure, either, but I got a picture in my head and gave it a shot...
My friend loves these and pointed this one out to me. And I owe Rabrrrrrr...:-)
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Rabrrrrrr Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-25-08 09:58 PM
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5. Only if you are so linear that your ____ is stuck.
:rofl:

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CreekDog Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-25-08 10:00 PM
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6. dizzy spell
:dilemma:
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Rhiannon12866 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-25-08 10:10 PM
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7. Um, brain?
Mine was stuck when I first read this, but I decided to reply, anyway. Your post evoked a picture of somebody in hiding, to me. nuxvomica, who loves your storylines, was stuck on this one, so asked me to reply. I'm not sure if I got it, but I tried. He'll also be replying, said mine gave him an idea, and he's the writer... :-)

BTW, you do know what I owe you, don't you? You totally coached me on baking a Christmas ham, back in 2006, when I was stuck here with only a ham and a lasagna dish, LOL. Thanks to your instructions, which I hung onto and followed every word, it turned out very well. I made another one last Christmas. Thank you, my friend.:hi:

Rhiannon:pals:
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Rabrrrrrr Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-26-08 01:22 PM
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10. I think you replied fine.
I have totally forgotten about the ham episode of circa Christmas 2006, but I am incredibly honored that you've kept the recipe and hung it up.

:blush:

I'm especially glad that the directions I have actually worked for you.

:woohoo:

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Rhiannon12866 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jun-27-08 08:50 AM
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13. Thank you. I haven't done this before, but the line you supplied was pretty evocative.
The pic of the ship that I posted is The Star of India, a 19th-century sailing ship that is moored in San Diego and I was pretty impressed with it. Beautiful ship, but those were also violent times...:scared:

And you really did help me. I'd never baked a ham and all I had was a lasagna pan here, as I said. But it came out very well, was a huge hit. I'll always be grateful, since that's what my friend, who was facing major surgery, and I was helping him out, wanted for Christmas dinner. I made another ham this past Christmas and followed the same directions, made it again for my friend, who had successful surgery and is fine, and nuxvomica, who brought me the ham, from Oscar's Smokehouse in Warrensburg, NY, was featured on The Food Network. I would have hated to have messed that up. So I'll always remember that experience. I hung on your every word, LOL.:hi:

Thank you, my friend...:yourock:
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Rhiannon12866 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jun-27-08 08:57 AM
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14. BTW, I bookmarked the thread, which was Christmas 2005.
You replied to me on the day, both before and after church. Thank you.:-)

Rhiannon:pals:

http://www.democraticunderground.com/discuss/duboard.php?az=show_mesg&forum=236&topic_id=15376&mesg_id=15376
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mainegreen Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-25-08 10:25 PM
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8. Olga Orange-head sat smugly in the fo's'cle, cursing the ship
which bore her father's name; Druzhina Naumovich' Krenitsyn Orange-head. The ship rested upon the captains table, the bottle precariously balanced. Over thirty three thousand tiny pieces of wood had gone into making that ship, consuming most of her fathers spare time. Every night he would retire to the library upon returning home from his office down at the docks, where he managed the largest shipping company on the Caspian sea. She remembered her mother spending most of her time in the kitchen, as her father, while not suffering at all from cash flow problems, refused to open his purse to hire staff. When dinner was finished, her mother would give her fathers meal on a tray, and she would carefully bring it up the three winding staircases, down the hall with the red carpet her father had imported from Persia, and through the last door at the hall's termination. Father would never look up from the ship in the bottle, and would remain hunched over, concentration marking his face, intent upon the myriad strings running from the ship in the bottle to her fathers fingers.
She hated that ship. That ship was the other woman in her father's life. For twenty years he worked on that ship, a masterpiece of modeling. When she turned sixteen, her father brought her down to docks to introduce her to the family business. Having no sons, the job fell on her shoulders to learn the family business; the buying and selling of goods, the careful management of the local tax collector, and the care of, and the knowhow to run and sail the schooner that her father owned. That first day, her father sent her home early with one of the staff. She had fallen ill and claimed it was the milk she had at breakfast, but the culprit had been the schooner itself: it was the ship in the bottle her father had worked on all these years. Most disturbingly, this ship, the life sized counterpart to the ship in the bottle she had always thought of as the real woman in her fathers heart bore his name! Images were conjured up by this horrible fact she could barely stomach. Unfortunately, with time, she was to become captain of this ship. She was to travel from port to port on the Caspian, buying and selling fish, dyes, rugs, cloth and other luxuries. She had herself become trapping in the ship, like the smaller twin was trapping in the bottle. And she would remain trapped for the remainder of her days. Trapped no longer by her father, but by the small ship in front of her. By that small ship that had consumed so much of her father's life. That small ship that had so strained her parents relationship, that when she had returned from a voyage on her twenty-fifth birthday, she had learned that her mother had finally decided to take payment for her wasted life. That she had taken that small, small ship down to her father's office and placed in on his desk, and when he looked at her, had proceeded to terminate their relationship in a most permanent fashion; utilizing one of the knives she had often used to cook his meals, having done so quite vigorously, in a manner that the papers had gleefully reported as a bloodbath.
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Rabrrrrrr Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-25-08 10:31 PM
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9. Wonderful!!
I love a story that ends with people dying violently.
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Parche Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-26-08 01:58 PM
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11. "Olga Orange-head sat smugly in the fo's'cle, cursing the ship
Named the Battleship Rabrrrrr, while she was screaming at the top of her longs, she fell, hit
one of the gunners, who immediately fired his big 16inch, gun that is, by accident, the enemy
fired back, and hit where Olga had fallen,and blew her to bits, it was a real bloodbath.

:woohoo: :hi:
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ZombieNixon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-26-08 02:12 PM
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12. Olga Orange-head sat smugly in the fo's'cle, cursing the ship
Edited on Thu Jun-26-08 02:15 PM by ZombieNixon
's mizzen yardarm, upon which she had been so recently strung up. Was it truly her fault the ship had been boarded by Byelorussian pirates while sitting in port? These kind of things happened all the time, never mind that Belarus, a middle-sized Eastern European country located between Ukraine and the Baltic states, had never been a big player in the realm of piracy. She sighed. Perhaps she was incompetent. No matter, she thought. She stuck her cutlass between her teeth and jumped overboard. She was officially switching sides, and it was sure to end in a

bloodbath.
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Elidor Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jun-27-08 05:49 PM
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15. Nautical nazi says: it's fo'c'sle
Edited on Fri Jun-27-08 05:51 PM by Hardhead
Not fo's'cle

:spank:

Foresickle?
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LaurenG Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jun-27-08 06:01 PM
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16. deleted
Edited on Fri Jun-27-08 06:20 PM by OhioBlues
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