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Mon Jul-07-08 06:44 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Mon 7/7/2008) |
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What why when where who I crush my wedding glass beneath my shoe
In with from to at I kiss my bride & cry Jehoshaphat
Five four three two one I father daughters & entomb a son
Minsk Flint Perth Seoul Rome I travel far to find myself at home
Large squat thin fat small I greet a stranger in a shopping mall
Taste touch smell hear see I lose my wife my gentle Melanie
I take my life & shake it by the hair Who what why when where
James Reiss
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Mon Jul-07-08 08:42 AM
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I take my life & shake it by the hair Who what why when where
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Mon Jul-07-08 03:29 PM
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Cycle...
Hmmm...
I like it!
I love poems that turn back on themselves...
...I take my life & shake it by the hair Who what why when where
Thank you!
:hi:
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