CaliforniaPeggy
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Wed Jul-09-08 10:46 PM
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And now...for the poem that was inspired by my new shirt: |
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I truly hope you will enjoy my little work...
The Fabric
The fabric
Rests in my hands
I will make my life
From it
I will spread the flimsy paper
Over the cloth
And see just where my life will go
And what will become of me
I will take the cloth
To cut and sew
To make three dimensions
Out of two...
I can get lost
In the folds and edges
But I will emerge
With something
I can use
Something I will live in
It’s up to me
To shape it
And be sure
To keep it safe
In good repair
So that it will cover me
For all my days
I take up the fabric
My life is waiting
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Wed Jul-09-08 11:34 PM
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I love how you're able to take everyday things and turn it into poetry.
It forces people to look at things in a different way. :thumbsup:
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Wed Jul-09-08 11:37 PM
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Ah, my faithful friend...
Yeah, it isn't all erotica!
I hadn't even considered the angle of forcing people to look at things in a different way...
Thank you, sweetie!
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Wed Jul-09-08 11:44 PM
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Wed Jul-09-08 11:50 PM
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4. I'm glad you do, my dear emilyg... |
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Thu Jul-10-08 12:07 AM
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5. The flimsy paper...... |
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This brought back memories of being 6 or 7 and my mom teaching me to sew. I loved the feel of the pattern paper.
The poem is beautiful. Who would have thought a new shirt would inspire such a jewel?
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Thu Jul-10-08 12:11 AM
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Wow, thank you!
I've had some difficulty lately getting the words out...
It seems almost as though I can be artistic at one thing at a time...
But the construction of the shirt definitely triggered me!
So glad you enjoyed this, and that it brought back good memories for you...
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Thu Jul-10-08 12:36 AM
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7. My dear CaliforniaPeggy! |
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Edited on Thu Jul-10-08 12:36 AM by ih8thegop
I like the deep, abstract perspective from which you look at things and offer your insights.
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Thu Jul-10-08 12:41 AM
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Hmmm...deep abstract perspective?
Not sure I'm getting this, to be honest...
My poem doesn't feel abstract to me, but very concrete...
But I know you're enjoying my work, and that matters a lot to silly Peg...
Thank you, sweetie...
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Thu Jul-10-08 12:50 AM
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9. I'm having a hard time coming up with another word |
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Perhaps what I'm trying to say is, few people would think about things from the angle you do.
:-)
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Thu Jul-10-08 12:53 AM
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That makes sense...
And I think you're correct...
You just never know where my mind will take me......and all of you!
Thanks, sweetie...
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Thu Jul-10-08 01:47 AM
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11. A string of words beautifully sewn... |
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pieced carefully together to create a lovely poem!
:applause: BRAVO! :applause: BRRRRRAVO!!! :applause:
:hug: :loveya: :hug:
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Thu Jul-10-08 02:01 AM
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12. My dear Green Meanie! |
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Your comments mean so very much, sweetie...
Thank you!
And you are up awfully late!
I was just scanning through the Lounge one more time before heading for bed!
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:loveya:
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Thu Jul-10-08 02:22 AM
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13. I don't roll my R's for just anyone, my dear! |
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;-)
Sun brewed tea with a very late dinner has left me wide awake with the need to peeeeeeee!!! x(
Sweet dreams, Peg!
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