kat_kringle
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Mon Jul-21-08 02:43 PM
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Monday afternoon pathetic poetry! |
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Edited on Mon Jul-21-08 02:45 PM by kat_kringle
Muhalo, you loungeriffic folk. Here is a poem. Please burn after reading.
and also? This isn't impressive, so don't think that I'm trying to be. That is all. Please post your poetry or limmericks, haikus or what have you. And it doesn't have to be pathetic, I only titled the thread as such so that I could call myself pathetic before anyone else does. :hi:
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Skipping the day to dream the time away I love to hear you scream Surrendering to the vigilant protesters whose blood is etched in stone vinegar, ammonia, fragrant wafts of scent fly through the air.
Scantily clad dogs bedazzle my head full of woe to hear you cry tightening in your sleep makes me howl in anguish serve me some bitter agony, I love the day that's over.
**edited to add some schtuff**
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Mon Jul-21-08 04:10 PM
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Mon Jul-21-08 04:58 PM
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i appreciate the input!
i think i might start a new piece, eventually, that incorporates that last line.
:hi:
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