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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jul-29-08 07:00 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Tue 7/29/2008)
The Red Wheelbarrow

so much depends
upon

a red wheel
barrow

glazed with rain
water

beside the white
chickens.

William Carlos Williams

****************

:hi:

RL
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xchrom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jul-29-08 07:56 AM
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1. ...
so much depends
upon

a red wheel
barrow

glazed with rain
water

beside the white
chickens.



william carlos williams was just bloody brilliant -- i can't say how much i love his stuff.
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Westegg Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jul-29-08 02:13 PM
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4. What I love is how WCW says anything, anything at all...
...can be the most important thing in the world, if you look at it right. It can be the thing so much depends upon. It can even be art.

I see a grey, chilly early spring morning at the end of March, the earth soaked as much by the last of the melting winter snows as by the rain that's falling.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jul-29-08 08:07 PM
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10. Yeah, it is pretty great...
:hi:

RL
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blueraven95 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jul-29-08 11:57 AM
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2. ...
:hi:
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SidneyCarton Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jul-29-08 12:56 PM
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3. The beauty of this poem is in its vivid minimalism
Ok, trying too hard to sound deep there. But I can see the wet yard, on a cloudy day, with the water beaded on the wheelbarrow. The chickens pecking around in the early morning cool. Amazing what a poem can describe.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jul-29-08 09:51 PM
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11. exactly!
Thanks for commenting!

:hi:

RL
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jul-29-08 05:09 PM
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5. ...
:kick:
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XemaSab Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jul-29-08 05:21 PM
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6. And you didn't tell the class the back story of this poem.
:P
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jul-29-08 05:29 PM
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7. Is there one?
:shrug:

RL
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XemaSab Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jul-29-08 05:43 PM
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8. There is
He was a pediatrician, and he wrote the poem outside the house of a dying child.

(Or so the story goes.)
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jul-29-08 07:55 PM
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9. Kick.
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