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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Sep-19-08 07:59 AM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 9/19/08
Edited on Fri Sep-19-08 08:00 AM by BlueIris
"BP Station Employee Restroom, 2 a.m."

Here's the diagram. Here's
what a sawed-off shotgun
looks like. Here's

a Derringer, here's
a Colt. Here are some words
we used for drunk: Smashed, Trashed,
and bombed
. Do not keep
any large bills on hand
after midnight. Here are some words
we use for kill: Hit. Taken out.
Elimination. Snuffed. Offed. Knocked
off
. Keep the lot
lights up, as well as

inside. Here are some words
we use toward love: Crush. Flame.
Arrow. Torch. Fallen. I

fell
. Maintain eye
contact with each oncoming

person. Greet them. Hi.
Hello, chief. Buenos
noches. Hey, buddy. Nobody
move
. Hello.

—Terri Ford
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Sep-19-08 06:33 PM
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1. Kick.
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mokawanis Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Sep-19-08 06:39 PM
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2. That;s an odd one
but I like it. First I've read by Ford, will look for more.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Sep-19-08 06:45 PM
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3. She's greeeeaaaat.
Just sayin'.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Sep-19-08 08:08 PM
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4. Kick.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Sep-20-08 07:33 AM
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5. Kick.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Sep-20-08 09:44 PM
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6. One final kick, because this one is so good. nt
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Sep-20-08 10:51 PM
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7. Nice!
I'll have to checkout more Terri Ford.

:hi:

RL
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-21-08 05:29 AM
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8. Terri Ford is COOL. nt
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Shardik Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-21-08 05:52 AM
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9. Beautiful!
An American Visit to Iraq


A million grains of sand

can't soak it up.

It stays on top

congeals

and finally dries

after the flies have fed.




the bones last longer.


the children

run past

the stain.

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Chorophyll Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-21-08 07:39 AM
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10. Here's a kick.
I like. :)
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-21-08 09:10 AM
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11. yep.
at 2an what else is there to think about...love, death, danger and how they happen.
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