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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Nov-24-08 07:24 PM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 11/24/08
"Open Field"

1

A couple of old horses,
who haven't seen each other
in a long while, will nuzzle up
and stand tail to head

in an open field.
Head to tail,
heart to belly,
shoulder to flank.

They'll rest, silence
softly steaming the air.

2

You came to me
in a dream last night,
for what I'm sure will be
the last time.

You stood behind me,
arms around my arms, holding
my hands and laying
your cheek against my neck.

Two old pieces of a puzzle
the night put together.

—Maria A. Wickwire
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Nov-24-08 07:27 PM
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1. Oh, that is nice. Melancholy yet nice
:hi:

RL
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Nov-24-08 07:30 PM
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2. Yeah, I thought "nice" would be good for a change.
Can't promise the rest of this week's selections will follow suit, though.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Nov-24-08 09:35 PM
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3. Kick.
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peruban Donating Member (888 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Nov-25-08 12:11 AM
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4. Re-kick.
A reflection on love and companionship, very nice.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Nov-25-08 12:47 AM
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6. Awwwww. Thanks, new poster.
In the poetry breaks, anyway.
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peruban Donating Member (888 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Nov-25-08 02:41 AM
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10. What can I say?
I'm a sucker for poetry.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Nov-25-08 12:15 AM
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5. My dear BlueIris...
How beautiful this is...

Just lovely...

Two old pieces of a puzzle
the night put together.


Thank you...

:hug:
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Nov-25-08 12:48 AM
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7. Thanks, Ms. C-Peg.
You Famous Published Author, you.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Nov-25-08 12:53 AM
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8. ...
:hug:
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Nov-25-08 12:57 AM
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9. like a pair of old shoes...
makes me sad that I will never know this feeling.
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