BlueIris
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Mon Nov-24-08 07:24 PM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 11/24/08 |
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"Open Field"
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A couple of old horses, who haven't seen each other in a long while, will nuzzle up and stand tail to head
in an open field. Head to tail, heart to belly, shoulder to flank.
They'll rest, silence softly steaming the air.
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You came to me in a dream last night, for what I'm sure will be the last time.
You stood behind me, arms around my arms, holding my hands and laying your cheek against my neck.
Two old pieces of a puzzle the night put together.
—Maria A. Wickwire
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Mon Nov-24-08 07:27 PM
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1. Oh, that is nice. Melancholy yet nice |
BlueIris
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Mon Nov-24-08 07:30 PM
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2. Yeah, I thought "nice" would be good for a change. |
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Can't promise the rest of this week's selections will follow suit, though.
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Mon Nov-24-08 09:35 PM
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Tue Nov-25-08 12:11 AM
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A reflection on love and companionship, very nice.
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Tue Nov-25-08 12:47 AM
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6. Awwwww. Thanks, new poster. |
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In the poetry breaks, anyway.
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Tue Nov-25-08 02:41 AM
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Tue Nov-25-08 12:15 AM
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How beautiful this is...
Just lovely...
Two old pieces of a puzzle the night put together.
Thank you...
:hug:
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Tue Nov-25-08 12:48 AM
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You Famous Published Author, you.
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Tue Nov-25-08 12:53 AM
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Tue Nov-25-08 12:57 AM
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9. like a pair of old shoes... |
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makes me sad that I will never know this feeling.
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