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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-10-09 07:32 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Tue 2/10/2009)
Sunflower

Before my desires
with their impossible hues,
before the first wings

descend, I remember
you remembered me
even when I was silent—

my body a tarnished
pendulum in a field
of other mourners,

dark-pitted hearts.
The grossbeaks
would pluck an eye

and another eye,
their taking
a plumed rape

communal and harsh
as light glimmering
on bladed stalks.

I felt your hands
bear my losses,
you became

a gold thread pulling.
By slow degrees
my face turned.

Karen Rigby

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:hi:

RL
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blueraven95 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-10-09 07:50 AM
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beautiful.



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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-10-09 05:50 PM
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Chorophyll Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-10-09 08:00 AM
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So nice. We planted sunflowers a few years ago (not that we had any room, mind you.) This reminds of me of how my son used to reach up and tug on them so he could "look them in the face."

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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-10-09 06:40 PM
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-10-09 09:47 AM
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-10-09 11:13 PM
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