BlueIris
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Thu Feb-19-09 01:41 PM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 2/19/09 |
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"A Hundred Bolts of Satin"
All you have to lose is one connection and the mind uncouples all the way back. It seems to have been a train. There seems to have been a track. The things that you unpack from the abandoned cars cannot sustain life: a crate of tractor axles, for example, a dozen dozen clasp knives, a hundred bolts of satin— perhaps you specialized more than you imagined.
-Kay Ryan
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Thu Feb-19-09 02:47 PM
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1. Anyone? Or should I just give up? |
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Thu Feb-19-09 08:00 PM
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Especially on the 2nd and 3rd reading. Excellent.
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Thu Feb-19-09 08:28 PM
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Sending that one to a friend. It just zips along.
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Fri Feb-20-09 02:39 AM
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5. Kay Ryan just zips along generally. nt |
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Fri Feb-20-09 03:32 AM
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First reading was just okay, but third time and it's growing on me!
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