The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Tue 2/24/2009)

[RetroLounge]

Dog Moon

The old dog next door won’t stop barking
at the moon. My neighbor is keeping a log:
what time, how long, if howling is involved.
I know she’s awake as I am, robe askew,
calling animal control, while I drink dark tea
and stare out my window at the Voodoo moon,
throwing beads of light into the arms
of the bare-chested trees. Who can blame him
when the moon is as big as a kitchen clock,
ticking like a time bomb? The bright full moon
with its beryl core and striated face, its plasma umbra,
pouring borrowed light into every abyss on earth,
turning the rivers silver, plowing the mountains’
shadows across grasslands and deserts, towns
riddled with mineshafts, oil rigs and mills,
yellow tractors asleep in the untilled fields.
The what-were-they-like-moon staring down
on rain-pocked gravestones, worming its way
into gopher holes, setting barbed wire fences ablaze.
Who wouldn’t love this old tooth moon,
this toilet paper moon, this feral, flea-bitten moon
is his moon, too. Certain-of-nothing moon, bone
he can’t wait to sink his teeth into. Radio moon,
the white dial tuned to static. Panic moon,
pulling a cloud like a blanket over its baby face.
Moon a portrait hung from a nail
in the starred hallway of the past.
Full moon that won’t last.
I can hear that dog clawing at the fence.
Moon a manhole cover sunk in the boulevard
of night, monocle on a chain, well of light,
a frozen pond lifted and thrown like a discus
onto the sky. I scratch my skull, look down
into my stained empty cup. That dog
has one blind eye, the other’s looking up.

Dorianne Laux

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[blueraven95]

1. morning!

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[RetroLounge]

6. Hello!

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[Chorophyll]

2. Man.

She is the best. :hi:

[RetroLounge]

7. She *is* good

I'm considering taking a 5 day workshop with her this spring.

If I can afford it in addition to the Sarah Lawrence Week.

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[Chorophyll]

12. I hope you can do it! nt

[RetroLounge]

18. Yeah, I'll decide this week...

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[Justpat]

3. Nice imagery.

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[RetroLounge]

8. Good evening...

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[Tuesday Afternoon]

4. yes

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[RetroLounge]

9. agreed

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[CaliforniaPeggy]

5. My dear Retro...

Beautiful...Great, dense imagery too...

*sigh*

My stuff never will sound like that...I'm just not that sort of wordsmith. But I love reading it all the same...

Thank you.

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[RetroLounge]

10. You never know, Peggy

She didn't start out writing this good, I'll guaranty you.

I keep hoping to be 1/2 this good someday.

Keep working at it.

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[CaliforniaPeggy]

11. You know I am working at it...

I thank you for your encouragement!

Tonight, I will read two erotic poems at the open mic poetry read...


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[Chorophyll]

13. Cool!

I'm impressed. Have fun tonight!

[CaliforniaPeggy]

14. Thanks!

This is one of them:

http://www.democraticunderground.com/discuss/duboard.php?az=view_all&address=105x8553379

[Sky Masterson]

15. "pouring borrowed light"

I love that.

I didn't think I cared much for it until it got to this part.
"The bright full moon
with its beryl core and striated face, its plasma umbra,
pouring borrowed light into every abyss on earth,"
After that I was hooked. :thumbsup:
Nice Selection.

[RetroLounge]

19. Thanks

can't go wrong with her poems...

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[BlueIris]

16. Ooooh, spooky. I was just thinking one of us should post more Dorianne. nt

[RetroLounge]

17. We both can!

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