CaliforniaPeggy
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Tue Feb-24-09 06:58 PM
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*The Kiss* My poem for the open mic tonight... |
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You take my kiss and you make it Yours
My lips part And my tongue is Just a moment away
I open my body I give your seed Life
The kiss is where we start Here: My kiss.
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Haole Girl
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Tue Feb-24-09 07:00 PM
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1. I love the way it just trails off... |
CaliforniaPeggy
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Tue Feb-24-09 07:04 PM
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And I just edited it to end that way...
Thanks, sweetie!
:hi:
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Tue Feb-24-09 07:00 PM
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Tue Feb-24-09 07:36 PM
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That poem and you can be described in one word:
Choice.
You're a wonder :hug: :loveya: :applause:
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Tue Feb-24-09 07:38 PM
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5. My dear SalmonChantedEvening... |
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Oh, sweetie...
You amaze me, always!
Thank you...:loveya: :hug: :pals:
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Tue Feb-24-09 09:40 PM
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Tue Feb-24-09 09:44 PM
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8. You're the one posting about your little cheerleader outfit |
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Wed Feb-25-09 01:41 AM
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Sorry to have offended you...
:-(
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Tue Feb-24-09 09:43 PM
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7. Back to the shower I go. |
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Wed Feb-25-09 01:42 AM
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Look at it this way!
You're staying clean...
;)
Thanks, sweetie...:hug:
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Tue Feb-24-09 10:30 PM
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9. Thank you. That is great. |
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Wed Feb-25-09 01:43 AM
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So glad you like it!
Thank you, sweetie...
:hug:
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Tue Mar-03-09 02:25 AM
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13. This is just a remarkably moving poem.. |
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Thanks ever so much, CaliforniaPeggy
:pals:
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Tue Mar-03-09 02:43 AM
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Oh, sweetie...
You are too kind!
Thank you...
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Tue Mar-03-09 02:39 AM
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14. My darlin' Miss Peggy! All I can say is: |
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WOW!
Fabulous poem, my friend.
Fabulous!
:loveya: :hug: :loveya:
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Tue Mar-03-09 02:44 AM
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Thanks, sweetie!
We know how good a kiss can be...don't we?
:loveya: :hug: :loveya:
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Tue Mar-03-09 02:46 AM
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it's been awhile, but good thing my memory is still intact. ;-)
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Tue Mar-03-09 02:43 AM
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16. That's what I call "poetry" |
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Tue Mar-03-09 02:45 AM
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Oh, I am so honored to have you appear here, in my thread...
Thank you, sweetie...
:hug:
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