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Thu Feb-26-09 07:44 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Thu 2/26/2009) |
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The Great Submarine Race It’s mad, but it just might work, he said, and floridly signed his name to The Great Submarine Race.
Submarines slumbered in his bloodstream and submarines burbled in shallow slips. The Flying Electrons bore the news around the world on cold white drafts and the news pierced the blue clouds.
A man in the square nudged his wife and told her they were Mammary clouds. Everyone’s transmitter cackled. Everyone’s bloodstreams burbled faintly.
The wife loved the lumpy clouds. The man’s submarine slipped its mooring and nosed her coral arches. Simultaneously, all the world’s submarines exhaled and plunged deep into the shifting water with their little engines racing, and when they met each other they battered one another’s hearts.
Matthew Rohrer ***************
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Thu Feb-26-09 08:20 AM
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2. I agree with Blueraven 95. |
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Ah, I love it!
Racy, haha
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