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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-09-09 09:16 AM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 7/9/09
"In Summer, 1977"

In the photograph it is August
and I am eight, leaning
against the front fender of my father's Dodge.
Sleepy grin, with one hand I offer
the string of my brown trout,
with the other I am waving to my father.

To the right, far back
through boughs and tree trunks
glows the late afternoon sun,
light low and golden along the far ridge.
In a moment, I will stop waving
and will give up the string of fish to the camera.
Beyond, the sky opens wide
and the sun pulses on fields I will run in,
close now to the end of summer,
the wind a wild bird
and my father's voice the sunlight off the car.

~Tim Hanlon
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-09-09 09:27 AM
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1. yes.
thanks.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-09-09 07:15 PM
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2. Yeah, I thought you guys deserved some actual poems next.
Song lyrics can be great, but they are only one kind of poetry after all.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-09-09 07:25 PM
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3. My dear BlueIris...
This has some lovely imagery...

Thank you!

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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-09-09 07:31 PM
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4. Yeah. I love "photograph" or "single memory" poems. nt
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-09-09 07:59 PM
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5. Awwww. A rec. nt
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