BlueIris
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Thu Jul-09-09 09:16 AM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 7/9/09 |
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"In Summer, 1977"
In the photograph it is August and I am eight, leaning against the front fender of my father's Dodge. Sleepy grin, with one hand I offer the string of my brown trout, with the other I am waving to my father.
To the right, far back through boughs and tree trunks glows the late afternoon sun, light low and golden along the far ridge. In a moment, I will stop waving and will give up the string of fish to the camera. Beyond, the sky opens wide and the sun pulses on fields I will run in, close now to the end of summer, the wind a wild bird and my father's voice the sunlight off the car.
~Tim Hanlon
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Thu Jul-09-09 09:27 AM
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BlueIris
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Thu Jul-09-09 07:15 PM
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2. Yeah, I thought you guys deserved some actual poems next. |
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Song lyrics can be great, but they are only one kind of poetry after all.
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Thu Jul-09-09 07:25 PM
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This has some lovely imagery...
Thank you!
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Thu Jul-09-09 07:31 PM
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4. Yeah. I love "photograph" or "single memory" poems. nt |
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